First of all, welcome to the site to both of you! After reading both your verses, just to give some advice, it's better to fill the limited character box sort of like how Boy_Truth did rather than to write them line by line like how WeedWhacker did. You will log more punches that way, and since the space is limited, you might as well make the most use of it. However, when you fill in the box, you still need a way to let your readers know where lines begin and end so that they may better grasp your flow and read it the way you intended. The popular way to do that here is to capitalize your end rhymes as you will see if you check out some other battles in the Basic Arena. You may also separate them with forward slashes (/) or just a couple dots (..) but lines should be separated somehow to aid readers. Onto the battle itself, Boy_Truth was a bit more direct. WeedWhacker, you might want to forego lines talking about yourself like saying you're Caucasian and just get down to the nitty gritty of dissing your opponent because that is what battles mostly boil down to. WeedWhacker did a better job of that in this match. I hope all of this was helpful. Fairs. Voted: WeedWhacker / Boy_Truth
Posted on: 2015-04-06 23:29:30

Both of ya need hard work.......anyways fairs in......both of ya give me fair opinion in my battles #Goodluck Voted: WeedWhacker / Boy_Truth
Posted on: 2015-04-07 00:27:31

Quantity took it... Voted: WeedWhacker / Boy_Truth
Posted on: 2015-04-07 15:07:48

Fv Voted: WeedWhacker / Boy_Truth
Posted on: 2015-04-08 21:47:25