Murda. Posted on: 2015-03-28 19:56:08

Dope hot spar here. As always my loser delivers good content but he only lost due to the entertainment I got in comparison from each side. I digg the punches from both but my winner has some nice punches that were a tad more of my tastes to say although both were extremely even. Swinging this way. Would've liked to see a rematch as both brung game. Could go either way. Stick in 2 my preference. Fair in thug's. Keep getting it! Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-28 20:27:39

LOL!!! SAME VOTE SAME SCORES SAME COMMENTS!! ROFLML!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-28 20:29:38

To my winner: eh... punches were hit and miss, some were decently thought out and executed, some were a bit generic. Most of the negative shit in your verse was your scheming - you had a multi set in there that could be considered broken, and you repeated stuff. Mostly filler stuff, but it still felt a little excessive to me. It wasn't bad, but I think it could have been a smoother and more interesting read if you had rewritten it. To my loser, your execution felt slightly more on point to me than the opponent's, but the concepts themselves weren't nearly as strong. Most of them felt really simplistic, or a little bit forced. When you write punches of the form [phrase] -> [punchline that is alternate meaning of the phrase] - that is, non-wordplay and idiomatic or quasi-idiomatic, you should make sure that [phrase] is something that the audience is familiar with, or something that doesn't sound like it was invented just to make your punch hit. That was alright in 2005, but now it seems really forced, and is generally associated with inexperienced battlers. This battle comes down to better concepts versus better execution, but one took it with an overall (slightly) stronger verse. Fair's in. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-28 20:32:44

MURDA Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-28 20:33:08

I felt the winner had slightly better punches overall some were kinda played but still had harder hitting...loser came dope as well but had lesser punches and personals that didn't have any zing to em...good battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-28 20:57:11

Good battle here wasn't to impressed by both my winner did enough to get the W.fv no hate~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-28 22:22:46

handle ma lightwork Z, Murda. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-28 22:26:50

Great battle. My winner had nicer/funnier punches that were a bit more complex and we'll Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-29 01:26:32

Well thought out. I felt like my loser had some nice bars but it seemed like there were less punches. I liked both but over had me laughing a bit more. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-29 01:28:13

close stuff, dope battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-29 06:02:39

MURDA. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-29 10:47:11

both did very well all around one had a slighter edge Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-29 14:51:54

Great Spar between both. One just edged this out. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-29 16:29:22

Winners verse had better executions and funny punches. Fair's tossed vb. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-29 23:03:00

One was on another level for me here, the other needs to slightly brush up what he's bringing now and I'd consider him a future threat on this site.dope bars for real but felt second half of verse lacked velocity. Continued excellence which I always expect from one here//fair 1 Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-30 10:47:46

Winner was just a more enjoyable read for me more smooth flow and punches hit better.. fair vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-30 17:14:54

Zorro line was nice tho lock and think on your sneaks is played Fidel but yea vote still atand good battle hoes Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-30 17:30:59

verrrryyyyyyyy close battle, dope on both sides. my winner edged it by more consistency Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-30 17:54:18