This was pretty good. One had a better structure and setups. I see why a punch bout a politician who killed himself in 1987 would go over heads though. Other wasnt as detailed with setups and concepts but the scheme for the first 2/3rds was good and helped him out. The last few bars didnt have the impact after he switched it up. Close. Both yall, good shit though. Posted on: 2015-03-29 15:35:26

Insup first few bars were dope...nawk your best bars were in the middle...too close for me to call though.... Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-27 07:40:13

This battle I must say got slept on. Insup you had some dopish swag to ya verse but the execution needed Tweak's in part's. But nawk had some do not push me 4 I push ya baby down the steps 4 he even born swag! When I read the plotting assassination line. It was sure all well executed. Although I feel alone that bar caught my buzz. I felt it was close in still a dope spar chief executive director assistant thug's could go either way but one bar had me tear up. Won't be mad at the outcome cuz both got hand's. . Fair's tossed. Send um back on my recents both of ya. Cuz i need y'all too. ~1~. Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-27 12:48:41

Damn both dudes KILLED THIS, so hard to pick a winner i hate having to do it. Both shined in different categories and were even with multi usage, ima have to give it by a small shaved cunt hair to this dude.. will not sway cause this a dope ass battle yo fair in Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-27 17:13:00

fv Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-27 23:19:00

One is a notch above the other. My loser had a somewhat nice flow but there were mismatched multis and punches that were irrelevant to the setup. My winner had better usage of multis. Better setups and better flow due to multis with matching syllables and syllable counts. Decent spar. My winner hadn't lost a step from when I used to see him all the time on here. My loser just needs a bit more practice Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-27 23:36:21

This was a good bout.. Both y'all had better aspects than ur opponent.. in the end i had to go this way.. don't wanna sway a close match up.. *salute* Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-28 16:51:04

Bar-wise, this was pretty even throughout. What gave one the edge was his multies were a bit more congruent and relied less on slant, and there were less choppy wording. Close but one edged. Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-28 16:53:53

One *tried* to have more punches than the other, but most of them really weren't well-thought-out, because they lacked the conceptual complexity and interesting/humorous double meanings that really need to be present for something to become an effective, hard-hitting punch. With that in mind, it's a shame that they weren't a bit stronger, because that meant that his opponent was able to take this with better scheming, flow, and execution, despite not having such a high punch density. Both need to teach themselves the fine art of writing punches - PM me if you're curious about why I made this decision or want my advice. Fair's in. Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-28 20:56:58

concepts are going over kids heads for real..kids need to pick up a newspaper nowadays and read Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-29 00:30:49

my winner, a bit more entertaining and wording was more natural scheme was a bit more complex , conceptually was pretty basic and nothing stood out to me...felt my loser's concepts to flips were poorly worded which hurt his chances here.. he had alot of good ideas just needed some polishing.. Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-29 01:30:46

Wadduppppp fellas . Keep pushing . Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-29 21:42:35

First emcee had a little stretched lines : seemed s little forcEd . 2nd had some concepts that were used often so I didn't get a feel for the punches . I give it to Homie because the concepts were creative good luck to both Voted: Insuppressible / S O U L R I T E
Posted on: 2015-03-29 21:52:52

Nawk Went Off! Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-04-03 10:29:38