Expo: "Bar for bar" and "brown his pants automatically" like Na-ZI'S D-DAY -- Reference to the BAR (Browning automatic rifle) used by allies in WW2. The bit of Star Wars wordplay ties into the WW2 references with "storm troopers". Great battle my dude Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-22 07:30:33

ion no if Im sleeping on quincy rn but Im not really feelin u that much, jay was nice with the wordplay tho Voted: Quincy® / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-03-22 07:38:52

Sall gud @not. I get slept on all the time bro. Idgaf tho. Niggas got hoes. BTW gud battle @Jay. Gluck FAM. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-22 07:45:17

@quincy yo could u do an expo Voted: Quincy® / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-03-22 11:02:06

quincy was flowing but jay had some punches. Voted: Quincy® / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-03-23 05:43:39

@not no expo is needed like read and weep young g. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-23 13:56:17

@fsmine you can't be serious bro. Your expo sounds like a 5th grade retard bro. No offense. You say you voted for a scheme w/no punches. To punches that were light bro? Lol bro you my wigga FAM. We both know that punches win battles as for all the elderly Battler's who r here bro. Js. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-23 14:01:57

The first few words, or line dictate how the rest of your verse shapes out in some cases which is just from my perspective, sometimes the majority might be all flow and swag then a punch line to cap it off, some over look these poignant factors and bug out because there is lack of mind fuckery type concepts and puzzles that you need professor Langdon from the Di Vinci code to encrypt, it's cool if you about that but I refuse to ignore craftsmanship. in saying that there is a stylistic gap between these two who put in the work, one is raw, not overly interested in bamboozling the reader but rather apply a more street approach to the proceedings, the other allows you to connect the dots, building a clever matrix for the more cerebral reader, I am voting on the style I prefer since both said some 'shit' as it were. anyway daps for both, the effort alone is worth some numbers. low 8, mid 8 to the winner. Voted: Quincy® / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-03-24 20:31:37

both dope but one connected on more punches here Voted: Quincy® / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2015-03-25 00:08:00