Irrelevant wordplay vs forced, nonsensical multis. DeprIved...not DeprEEved. nothin personal, but that shit dont make any sense whatsoever. u still win tho.... Posted on: 2015-03-24 21:34:26

haha! its not my fault 'mad that this geek' and 'gassed and deprived' dont rhyme. you won. congratulations. Posted on: 2015-03-25 17:17:50

I felt as though my loser was on his A-game with wordplay but only one of his punches connected. My winner took this strong the whole way through with his consistency and an aggressive attack the whole way through. Fair's tossed. Voted: NoT / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-03-22 07:22:29

Quincy went in on this. Fairs in.. Voted: NoT / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-03-22 09:21:31

Fair's Tossed. Loser had forces lines and multies. Winner came harder. VB Voted: NoT / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-03-22 21:10:08

one edged it due to harder punches in my opinion Voted: NoT / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-03-23 19:22:29

The Adam and eve and Catching his re's line are my quotable's for this battle and considering it's a key it adds to the swag. NoT schemed the Dragon ball Z thing all throughout his verse and its dope to see, however for me the winner takes this with a more natural flow and less unforced material. Daps for the two who did they thing Voted: NoT / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-03-24 18:13:11

Hard to vote on this one because you two seem pretty evenly matched. But here we go nonetheless. Not, your Dragonball Z theme was interesting, and quite honestly it was fun to read. Not used to that. With that being said however, I feel a few of the lines could have been executed better. Try not to focus on the double-entendre effect so much. Too much of one thing in a verse is bad for everything else after a while ya know? Other than that it was a good and creative drop. Quincy, you know how to structure and set up punches, but I feel you need to connect them better. A lot of your punches weren't impactful to me tbh. They had the flare and style and intensity but just didn't wow me chief. The fact you have the skills to pull it off proves you're nice. I'm not doubting that. It just comes with experience and learning how to deliver what you're trying to say on the screen better. But who am I? Lol just my own opinion. Not a bad drop from you but I know there's a lot better coming pretty soon from you. Anyways, fair vote is dropped fellas. Much respect to both of you. Voted: NoT / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-03-24 20:00:09

hmmm shemework and wordplay vs multis and humor . punches were quite light but for me one edged it with battle verse . gb and nh Voted: NoT / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-03-24 20:50:17

Esso. It is deprived. De-prive-ed. not deprEEved. I don't know what you read but. Lol. It's deprived. Also meansof a person) suffering a lack of a specified benefit that is considered important. "the men felt sexually deprived" straight from Google. Study up g. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-25 01:45:33

Esso your votes get extra retarded every time you place a vote on my battles yo no lies. Nonsensical multi? Where? The first lines have multi counts that line up and match up pretty good to make sense of the idea. "SWING FIRST IN A GAME OF GOLF??" "BRING HURT'S THAN A BANG RESOLVES???" (YOUR NOT DUMB) SAVVY WITH KEYS/ PASSING HIS HEAVES?? W/O a doubt IMA "CUM OUT FIRST" like ADAM N' EVE??? " okkkay.. Other nonsensical multi. Catching his re's rattle a 3. That was the only multi that was slanted IMO. Plus you deliver 3-4?? You keep your comments to YA self yunging. You don't know how to deliver this way nor do you know how to give credible vote's yo. Js. No h8 on you. You gotta get some time and read battle's. Don't say anything stupid bro. You my wigga? Perhaps another day thug. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-25 01:54:58

Slewdem Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-03-25 13:14:58