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Posted on: 2015-03-22 14:53:17

Close Voted: SPACE_DABREE / Los
Posted on: 2015-03-23 15:38:04

Good to see you back Los. Let's get into it. Space you're getting better fam. I can definitely tell a difference in your flow, mutlies, and overall intensity. Keep tailoring it and fine tuning it and keep stretching to be more creative and you'll be able to hold your own against vets pretty soon. Los, the exhaust line is a played concept but you executed it really nicely. That takes true skill. Your verse was a solid response. Started strong and finished strong as well. Much respect to both of y'all. I think a 16 between you two would be dope. Vote is explained, please respect it. Voted: SPACE_DABREE / Los
Posted on: 2015-03-24 16:10:01

I have no critiquing licence but in saying that both boxes were good to read, unforced and seem to have come natural from your heads to your fingers and onto the screen. some look for the real creative conceptualized material that can be an enigma of ideas, others look for smooth runs from punch to punch without breakage in rhythm with the added bonus of swag, a good scheme and solid punch lines that maybe need a little less time to process, merging both I guess you get the perfect marriage which in essence creates the best possible verse. I'm going on a bit but the winner got my vote just based on how they closed. Daps for both. Voted: SPACE_DABREE / Los
Posted on: 2015-03-24 20:01:14

Space definitely improved. Los had too many funny bar's and played better personal punches in the mix yo close but solid box. Send the fair back @Los Voted: SPACE_DABREE / Los
Posted on: 2015-03-25 04:00:42