Yo two I sent you a battle...tried to beat Ill to this one but was too late, you can get at it whenever good drops guys Voted: Official_C2 / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-12-29 14:34:07

That was probably the sickest opener I've read in a while Ill! Too dope lol you toned it down a bit afterwards but your drop overall was very well rounded. ctwo, you have potential and the basics down such as structuring your verse and using caps to differentiate rhymeschemes. But now you should work on rhyming with creative ideas, some that attack your opponents name or his crew. Because it looks like you're just trying to rhyme without putting thought into it. But overall, nice mentor/mentee battle here. Fair and explained vote submitted. #VotingBack Voted: Official_C2 / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-12-29 21:40:44

@UNILAD I get what you're saying but I didn't direct the battle towards a specific person so I couldn't diss a crew or person of some sort lol but I appreciate explained criticism tho; not many people do that rendering their comment(s) useless so thx dude Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-12-29 23:57:44

Lol nice Voted: Official_C2 / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-12-30 01:53:40

Ctwo- good verse brotha I can see improvement for sure now you just need to structure some punches but soon you'll be a force no doubt...oh yeah and accept my battle. ILL- brotha this drop was fire no matter who you were battling it would be hard to compete with that...I do see you falling off towards the end a tad bit but still edged. Voted: Official_C2 / Bnas
Posted on: 2015-01-01 15:51:02