Philip Seymour hoffman is a dead actor lol, and when i said i'd slash ya femer in half and you'd be down with syndrome, the way doctors tell if a baby has down syndrome is if the baby has abnormally short femer bones.. and my crew is syndrome as u can see Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-12-05 13:39:20

btw, tori u should start checking around these other battles and get a sense of how they set there verses up. the way ur doing it is as if it is a real track, which is good for writing music but as far as text battles, its more about multiple ryhmes, punchlines, vocabulary and wordplay more than anything else, nobody cares if the way u wrote it fows correctly, save that for your real music. this is just to practice getting more creative with your bars, because every lyricist already has a sense of rhythm, but not every lyricist can bring bars to the table. ik alot of these can be hard to read when ur new to it but once u understand it, you'll catch on and get reaaaal good at it. think of it as a game that trains your mind like memory. u did good by taking shots on my name, i do that to almost everybody, just keep practicing and getting more creative with it. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-12-05 13:49:15

l Voted: torivex / Tony Shanks
Posted on: 2014-12-05 14:00:51

leave expos ^ READ IT some ppl put alot of thought in what they got to say, quit being lazy fucks and show some respect, i actually read yalls shit, do the same. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-12-05 14:08:02