Liquid Wolf vs JayImmortal - Text Rap Battle - Battle Rap and Rap Battles at LetsBeef.com


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Text Ranked Battle
Length: 16 Lines

Liquid Wolf (12%)

Exclusive Member

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Los Angeles, California, United States

JayImmortal (88%) WINNER

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: Multiville Horror

Reppin: Vancouver, Washington, United States

Liquid Wolf

yo shit aint tough it reminds me of a CUDDLE/ everybody want my game plan tell em get the fuck up out my HUDDLE!/ tick.....tock bitch your time is up we CLOCK FAGGOTS/ not Randy Marsh but I will show yo bitch COCK MAGIC/ she give me too much DOME TO MENTION/ she be choking on the kids like HOMER SIMPSON!!!!/no shock value but I give off LIGHTENING FLOWS/ my team know who to fuck up I don't gotta say TITANS GO!/ you claim your shit is piff I call it REGULAR THOUGH/because he's just another big head with a REGULAR SHOW/ you snitched on your homie so you wouldn't experience RAPE/ he won't Adventure Time cuz he fit in with Jake/ missing san fran the only time i'm BAY SICK/ keep acting two face and get yo FACE SPLIT!!/
Hulkamania get treat like a T shirt I RIP PLENTY/ whoever act Shady in the scope get 50!!!/
now aint that IRONIC got the choke hold on you and the arms BIONIC!!/
I prove we NOT THE SAME/ i'm raping more than those COSBY CLAIMS/

JayImmortal

[kobe bryant]? .. smh the [hoes be lyin'], sayin' he [flows the tightest] on RECORDS WHEN he brags about the [hoes he's likin'], and hip hop? the only ["flow" he likin'] is that PROGRESSIVE BITCH // Dude, you're a weak bitch and you're weaker when you're "SPITTIN' IT" so how can we expected you to "hold composure" when you're TRIPPIN' 'N' DRIBBLIN'!! // I've seen the "old me in your style", so I'll take SHOTS WITH GRIPPED NINES and having "my name written on the bullets" is the only way OCK WILL GET SIGNED!! I'm always pleased to battle fans but battle fans ain't PLEASED WITH YOU so quit frontin' like ya controversial and admit you ain't a GENIUS DUDE!! // The only flow that you're packin' on your tracks are rare ONES, G, and I know it 'cuz it's habit of a bitch to not record on their MONTHLY! // ya city's naming convention reflects ignorance, ya MAN CAME WITH ANGLES, we know "Los" in spanish is "the" and "angeles" TRANSLATES TO ANGELS.. It "reflects on your entire city's idiocy and your rap career", FUCK WITH JAY THEN look at your city's team... "The the angels angels" DOESN'T MAKE SENSE(cents) !! // [Last bar] for the [fag tard] who [lacked smarts] and LEFT THIS OPEN, and it turned out to be a disaster for him like when the LEFT IS VOTED!! // #FourHorsemen

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Battle started: November 29^th 2014 at 05:07
Challenger joined: November 29^th 2014 at 09:59

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2014-11-29 09:59:18).

Staff Comments

Esso
<TheHitmen>
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Winner was alright...understood structure and flow better. Decent jabs but the LA scheme was a lot of work for a meh punch. Loser had good ideas...lines get slept on if you dont structure your verse like everyone else though. coulda executed the cartoon network scheme a little better. close battle. Posted on: 2014-11-29 17:14:11

Member Comments

Cujo Caine Exclusive Member	fv in ez win here winner was better by 360% fv in vb thanks Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-29 12:39:12
Kimber Red <Syndrome> Basic Member	My winner had the betterverse in all aspects. My loser need to work on their craft and keep at it you will get better. Work on multis and similes to set up your punches. Respect tp bpth and keep at it. Return the FV both of you! Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-29 13:51:08
COFFIN DODGER	actually agree with kimber for a change ! Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-29 14:25:42
Quoshint Banned	Dopest shit I've ready from Jay. #Salute!!!! Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-29 16:20:23
I AM EGO Basic Member	Fv Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-29 19:06:24
sick vicious <Syndrome> Exclusive Member	Always fair never hate winner better all around both send 8 Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-29 22:16:13
RipThaRappa <1ChAmP>	Fair vote..felt winner had better structure and better punches is always gonna get you that "w" when it comes it rap battles...good battle y'all no hate Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-30 01:01:16
Frantikk Basic Member	Landslide.. Not a terrible battle though. Props Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-30 18:48:29
Side8 <Agent> Basic Member	clear win Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-30 20:10:28
Louie Dawgs <LevelUp>	Yo, I'm probably going to vote for the loser, but it's pretty clear to me which verse was better. I thought that Kobe had a pretty solid verse, even though he'll probably lose due to bullshit aesthetic requirements on this site. Structure wise it wasn't anything to write home about, but the actual writing was pretty solid. JayImmortal was okay to me. I didn't think his verse flowed as smoothly, and a lot of his ideas were pretty basic. I guess that his flip on Los Angeles at the end could have flipped it for me, but I didn't really think it was an effective breakdown. Fair. Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-30 20:42:28
Ammo C Basic Member	easy win here good effort Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-11-30 21:18:15
J8E Basic Member	Felt Jayymortal tried coming too complicated lol adn through ounches but none landed... he won but only because it' looks better ha', not voting, just commenting Comment Only Posted on: 2014-12-01 05:38:03
Liquid Wolf Exclusive Member	yeah I felt my structure cost me this battle...oh well on to the next one Comment Only Posted on: 2014-12-01 15:11:49
Golden blaze Basic Member	, Voted: Liquid Wolf / JayImmortal Posted on: 2014-12-01 15:18:19
JayImmortal <MvH>	It just came down to structure, I guess. If that was solid you would've taken the win. Mad props and stay dope, my dude. Comment Only Posted on: 2014-12-02 07:41:14


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