expo - shakespear wrote sonnets / the probe on the comet atm aint anchored as planned / virgin test rocket/ship exploded / janus was the 2 faced god / surface of mars is red with no signs of life ... YET !!! lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-14 18:20:08

btw don't want no fag taking this , I put work into this verse and want a dope reply :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-14 18:45:24

Yo Steve I keyed this on my notepad! I got you! Usually we make hotlist everytime! Leggo!! I can scheme too! Needs to brake the 2-2 record yo. Lol! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-14 20:09:14

Yea Steve always dope. Lol I keyed this in roughly ten mins. Lol! I needs to write more but definitely a Gud one man! Gluck. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-14 20:14:45

lmao yo Q ! yeah bruh we always have good battles , reckon it will split the voters this battle ... Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-14 20:27:18

Low and high- ilike both this was a gud one! I felt like my winner was a lil more creative but my loser landed nice with sum personals ! Nice shit from both ! Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-14 20:29:53

this way Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-14 21:59:08

stevevenom: You are elevating, slowly but steadily. This battle is definitely the best work I have seen out of you yet. You had a decent flow/structure, and you actually brought some solid punches to the table. However, I still have some criticism of the punches you brought. Saturn Uranus/sat on your anus really doesn't work for me, because of the missing r in sat on your anus... maybe that's just a British/American accent difference thing? The other one I didn't like was the BATTERING JANUS punchlines... it's too straightforward. To share a bit of wisdom I learned from a great emcee by the name of ILLoKWENT, it's like saying "I'm going to punch your face, like hitting the PLACE YOUR EYES, NOSE, AND MOUTH ARE" - technically, it's a type and form of a double meaning, but it's just too straightforward to really be clever or funny. Moving on... QuincyRoyal: First thing I noticed was your failure to capitalize the multies in your verse... which isn't a total failure, or a killing blow, or something that will make me dock you points off the rating I give to your verse, but it's considered to be the bad form of an amateur to not capitalize your multies, and some people will (either consciously or unconsciously) give you a lower rating for it. I felt like you put too much space between the instances of your multies, and that the "punches" (more like bar-closers) weren't really punches at all... they were just statements made, with no twists or double meanings. Maybe the part about "using the cans" was a punch, but if it was, I suppose that, then, it's my fault for not getting the joke. All in all, this battle was pretty one-sided... both need to keep elevating, but both definitely have potential - one, I think, more so than his opponent. Fair's in. Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-14 22:19:43

Such a low score! Loool!💤 Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-14 23:30:42

didnt like the whole battle Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-15 10:37:21

probably cos your a fag ? Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-15 10:41:44

No Steve he's just trash. We dgaf? If you like the battle? Okay ! We'll if not don't read and vote? Simple . Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-15 17:35:05

damn , we got marked down by a guy with a 9% win percentage ! and true what quincy said , shouldn't mark people dow just because you 'didn't like the battle ' ..try being constructive in ya comments douchebag lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-15 18:29:31

Congrats! You got your GC fammo! Good shit! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-16 21:37:17

Venom filling up the comment box with all his trash. Just post ur verse and sit tight. Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-17 02:21:50

Fv Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-17 02:22:53

Winner here edged wit slightly more creative angles..my advice is make sure u write wordplay that reads correctly in both meanings.other had quotated words that were concepts that never materialized into punches...kinda just thrown in for fucks sake.fairs in Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-17 04:00:19

Good scrap right here. I'm feeling its close, both had structure & punches. My winner did a better job w/ setting his punches up tho. Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-17 10:48:10

Fair vote. One filled the box more and had more creative punches throughout. Gb. Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-17 11:26:37

gud shit Voted: COFFIN DODGER / Quincy®
Posted on: 2014-11-17 17:35:37

Fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-17 17:38:42

Always a pleasure Steve end um. Lol Gud shit bra. You the goat for now. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-11-17 22:13:28