best of luck bruh Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-25 14:32:41

both had pretty decent bars. winner had some pretty good single and multi rhymes and punches. opponent needs to work on his punchline setups. shorten the lines up then POW! punch delivered. add a few multis to beef up your verses. good luck to both..peace Voted: Anti-Virus / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-25 14:37:18

Yea GL Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-25 15:00:26

Yeah one needs to work on setting up his punches not that winner's set ups were perfect but he had some nasty multis towards the end that got my vote. When attempting word play make sure it sounds exactly the same because people can be nazi's about "reaching" good battle guys fair vote. Voted: Anti-Virus / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-25 16:53:14

Thanks 4 advice and feedback Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-25 17:09:59

all good brothers i will work on my setup and other weak links Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-25 21:52:17

Hmm... weak stuff from both... I don't know how, exactly, I could give this an in-depth breakdown, but briefly, one had slightly better quasi-punches, while one had slightly better quasi-schemes. Fair's in. Voted: Anti-Virus / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-26 23:33:14

Octavia acting like he is rap god here -_- Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-27 10:36:14

Winner had a much better flow connecting his punches. Loser was hard to follow. Voted: Anti-Virus / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-27 17:06:27

close one, winner took this with better multis Voted: Anti-Virus / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-28 04:11:49

browncigar summed this one up pretty convincingly. one was better with schemework and multi game. nbetter luck next time homies. y'all both my lil dudes. keep at it. Voted: Anti-Virus / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-28 12:12:41

fairs in, props to proct on da wordplay Voted: Anti-Virus / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-29 01:23:41

fv vb Voted: Anti-Virus / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-30 02:06:33