uyyyeaaaaaaaaaaaaa Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-23 14:45:19

Quite ez win for my winner. Loser was slow in multi game and practically all over with structure. My winner had the smoother read with some light jabs. Fv is in. Don. Send me back. As I know you will. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-24 01:00:30

dope Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-28 02:17:33

Pretty nice battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-31 18:30:52

You no i could get this battle re opened right? Both of your votes have NO expos at all Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-12-02 14:36:54

battle reopened due to poor voting ...... Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-12-03 22:27:58

ILLoKWENT asked me to drop a vote on this, so here we go... I felt this battle was fairly clear cut. I felt my winner had some noticeable flaws, mainly pertaining to his structure, with a couple of mismatched multi sets. An easily-fixable, much less insidious, problem, is when you write things like this: "ur PURPLE CAR KEY FINDER" - The first word ("ur), unless I'm somehow severely misreading this, is also part of that multi set, which means it should also be capitalized. I wasn't feeling the punchlines you were throwing (and you weren't throwing many), but I did like your multi abilities. Work on spinning your punchlines into more complicated double-meanings... speaking of ILLoKWENT, I think his battles would be great reading for you. As for my loser, you really, really, disappoint me, every time I read your battles, hoping that you will drop something heavier than the last time I read one of your drops. The sad part here, is that you didn't even just bodybag your unsuspecting opponent with a snipe. What's even sadder than that, is that I've actually seen you drop verses quite a bit superior to this one. Some of your punchlines here didn't really even make sense - just re-read them and try to find where you put in a double meaning. Wait, no? There isn't one? "I told them ok bitch I lay down I want one on my dick and ONE ON MY FACE you such a pervert you gettin wet reading this likey THUMB ON THE PAGE but you like a 'blonde' cause you DUMB WITH THE RAGE i dare you to YELL IN MY FACE Ill grab the pistol and let the SHELLS DOMINATE.." That's not how you write a punchline, bro. You said he's like a blonde, and then named obvious things blondes do, or traits they are commonly known to possess. You have to learn to add wordplay and double-meanings to your punchlines. Look, man, I know why you're still such a low-tier cat on this site, and it's because you either can't or won't put in that bit of needed effort to continue elevating. All in all, one's got this easily, with a fundamentally flawed, but overall much harder-hitting, verse. Fair's in. Low-Mid. Voted: LORD SKY / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-12-03 22:39:41

Wow...two very different styles but both were dope my reasoning for why I voted this way was bc I'm a big fan of the string of rhymes my winner used...both went hard PM for better expo fairs tossed return it Voted: LORD SKY / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-12-04 00:43:08

Great battle my loser had a good verse but i was feeling my winners overall verse more Fv no hate~ Voted: LORD SKY / Bnas
Posted on: 2014-12-04 00:45:31