thought was pretty close , seen winner drop a lot better but had a couple of punches which made me smile so gets it ..loser improving but not enough this time , and Iresponded to this but proc beat me too it lol , so sent the 8 to ya kid .. nh. Voted: The Kid RS / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-20 20:08:56

I think he had a better delivery than the other cat big ups to both hope to battle the person I haven't batteled yet but ask my boi Venom I appeared from nowhere taking names lol Voted: The Kid RS / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-20 20:42:56

close 1 4 me Voted: The Kid RS / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-20 21:29:49

That was pretty close but feel like my winner had dope punches and wordplay Voted: The Kid RS / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-21 12:58:23

felt both came with light punches in this battle, one had a basic rhyme scheme going with all caps that made his verse look like one big multi-gasm..good material but the winner had a slight better structured verse...good luck to both..peace Voted: The Kid RS / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-22 23:29:56

This was a really close battle, but both could use a lot of work. The loser had better multis but lacked solid punches and came with generic gun bars. The winner had a very simplistic rhyme scheme but stretched a little farther to get those punches in. They weren't spectacular as they lacked setup and and solid backing but they did the job due to the fact that his opponent was really only shit talking, he takes this. Kid Rs: For one, don't capitalize your whole verse, make it easier to distinguish your rhyme scheme by only capitalizing end rhymes. Also, gun bars are the most played concept in the rap genre, unless you have somethin. REEAALLY good that nobody has heard before and doesn't sound generic, stay as far away from gun bars as possible. Procto: In order to progress as a rapper, it's imperative that you try to aim for 3-5 syllable rhyme schemes, unless you have mad inrhyming (where 2 syllables is justified somewhat) never go below 3 syllables. Another thing with your verse is the structure was off. Don't just ramble with rhyming words here and there. Set it up 1 bar at a time, a rhyme scheme interwoven and go from there. Keep it coming guys, practice make perfect. Voted: The Kid RS / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-23 10:51:23

feelin kids rs first punchlines Voted: The Kid RS / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-23 13:50:50

I felt the punches from one harder. Voted: The Kid RS / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-10-23 18:15:47