good luck bro. Expo= over kill /quadruple entendre. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-20 16:34:55

I felt this dude had the better punches prefered his verse fv no hate~ Voted: MiD-NiGht / NOT ABD AM
Posted on: 2014-10-20 18:48:10

co-sign wit row, one had alot of delivery an wording issues, his contender didnt bring anything that'd raise an eye brow but he was consistant with his verse and showed a more advanced understanding with what to go for. fairs in, Voted: MiD-NiGht / NOT ABD AM
Posted on: 2014-10-22 04:00:41

Decent battle here guys. The loser's lines were way too stretched out. The rhymes were inconsistent, but you had some decent wordplay coming in towards the middle and the multi game picked up but sort of fell off at the end. That last wordplay was extremely stretched. Like a rubber band doing yoga stretched. Winner started off a lil rocky, but came through and redeemed himself, Solid punches though honestly some of them need some expo. Just a little unclear as to how some of the concepts tied in. You quoted some things that added to the overall concept but I didn't see their relavancy when it came to backing the punch. Could be my lack of understanding, but overall decent battle. Keep it comin. Voted: MiD-NiGht / NOT ABD AM
Posted on: 2014-10-23 11:04:11

could of been better tbh, one stretched out the lines, and boths multis were kind of iffy fair vote is in Voted: MiD-NiGht / NOT ABD AM
Posted on: 2014-10-23 11:41:57

fv Voted: MiD-NiGht / NOT ABD AM
Posted on: 2014-10-23 12:44:34