Expo: only thing i need to say is that carlton MID strength is a beer in australia... Peace any thing else pm me Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-03 21:11:30

Ok Mid ur opener is decent but the last line into the mad den flip doesn't really make sense. Kinda missed the pass. Then u wasted the next bar with the horizon line leading into the whores eye son which again is a very loose connection at best. and the satanic line "can't find nun" is cool but it's not true. There are plenty of backward nuns at the say antic church as it's mocking the Christian church so it's done frequently... So again a squandered opportunity. This verse doesn't get much better. But you do have a ok flow and aren't far off from landing punches. Golden your opener was ok but your lube/loop flip is bad and doesn't work. And kike? Is that a racial slur? Idk or gaf. After that the end rhymes seemed forced. But u have decent set ups and one good punch. Tho Mid was more consistent in his attack. Tuff choice. Fairs in. Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-03 21:49:36

oh yea..And both need to work on multis and structure. one. Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-03 21:53:45

wasn't really feeling the wordplay going on from both. both lacked punching power, and a good rhyme scheme. winner by a few punch attempts...good luck to both... Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-04 02:31:50

Obviously half the shit went over his head. Its alright, when he gets to my level in like 80 years he be like i shit i cant believe i didnt see that... and intent why the fuck did you vote for me if my lines sucked so bad.... Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-10-04 05:14:12

both stretched out the punches and were a bit iffy on wording but i have my winner fv Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-04 08:24:17

both were sloppy. #KeepGrindin' Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-04 16:49:36

felt winner took with better punches. loser didn't seem on his game for this battle usually comes with more punches. Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-05 21:36:36

ok I wanna battle both of yall lmao Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-06 02:16:01

winner had some hardness to it Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-06 03:10:27

nice but i got to pick 1 so i did Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-06 17:49:41

Both have an idea of what needs to be done, just a matter of connecting those concepts to punches/wordplay, without reachin too far ... shouldnt have to think about a bar for a long time just to kind of get what youre trying to get at...takes away from the pop, can ruin the integrity of a verse Voted: MiD-NiGht / Golden Armz
Posted on: 2014-10-07 01:13:47