Decent battle. Winner had the more creative concepts with the punches to back them. Good multis with a solid flow. Loser had a couple punches I liked but was inconsistent imo. Good stuff tho boys! Fairs in. Keep Elevatin' Voted: Quincy® / Manhattan
Posted on: 2014-09-18 13:22:11

Pretty close in some standards. Felt the winner's execution was cleaner, so was the read. He head some high-points in his punches, some not so much. Wordplay was there w/ and overall strong closer. The loser lost this w/ a couple played lines that I felt drug him through the mud per-say. The opener was pretty nice, could've been set-up better though. You got some of the ideas, just get rid of the played shit and focus on upping the creativity and you could be nice w/ text. Keep up the elevation, fair's in. Voted: Quincy® / Manhattan
Posted on: 2014-09-18 13:25:16

quick expo: if you came here to fight.. "LET'S SKIP THRU THE BLUFFIN!" cuz i will "punch a hole in this bird" and get a "FIST FULL OF STUFFIN/STUFF IN!" is just saying that when he battles he's just texting not the physical point of it. other half means that he's soft and i will punch a hole in this bird and grab his organs or something. so that fists full of stuffin is used in 2 context. next: if he "DUES/DO'S THIS AS ACCORDING" i'll have his sweet sides riped when "FOOL FLIPS IN HIS AWNING!" cuz if he know that the only thing better than "a couple of roses on a piano" is his hot girls "TULIPS ON THIS ORGAN!!" it's just saying that he ain't got no girls in his bed so when "FOOL FLIPS IN HIS AWNING" or "DUE'S/DO'S THIS AS ACCORDING" got to tie together for the wording and concept. the other half cuz if he know that the only thing better than "a couple of roses on a piano" is his hot girls "TULIPS ON THIS ORGAN!!" just says that i can take all his love away. and using musical references to tie into the first engine or revving part of the bar. lastly: cuz if he "top gun?" well how much can this "GEEK'S MASS WAGER?" cuz only time we see a "general flat" is when we "SEEK MASS LABOR!" so when i run over this prick and "BEAST PASS HATER" i'll be running over him with my "steam roller" so i can "SEE/C FLAT MAJOR!" the first part is "top gun" which goes into relation w/army and how much weight you pack sorta like them thugs use. so "GEEK MASS WAGER" ISa nice find. and the next part is the general flat reference which ties into fitness also that thug concept. and when army ppl have to work hard the general's usaully have to give up alot of work. so "SEEK MASS LABOR" is an appropiate way to setup that concept. but the next was the executional part of the punch the beast pass hater is the start of the finish which is like the transititional part of the first half so beast pass hater can also refer to that weighty concept. and there was this joke that was said in a fashion that i took the svheme and made it a punch. Q. What do you say after you run an army officer over with a steam roller? A: See flat major. there is my expo hope you guys enjoy. only fair voters! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-18 13:27:40

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Posted on: 2014-09-18 13:33:24

Both nice. Loser used a played line or two winner punched a little harder and had better multi usage. Fv in. Voted: Quincy® / Manhattan
Posted on: 2014-09-22 00:51:39