EXPO !!! in case you missed it , I used of PALINDROMES ( words or phrases that are spelled the same forward as backwards ) the ones I used were STEP ON NO PETS and POTS N PANS / SNAP N STOP = also REPAID is a play on REPAID backwards . not trying to sway votes as not my style , just pointing out th wordplay I used as some people may miss it unless they know what they are looking for lol .peace , and hope somebody good takes this battle lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-13 18:35:31

gb bleu as usual lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-13 18:48:55

yeah had a couple in my mind for a while , was just workin on the setups for them , thought it was time I tried em ...don't see many so see what the 'critics' of wordplay think lmao :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-13 18:56:42

Look DO-FUS those rhymes ain't clean they CHEWED UP your a HUGE SCRUB who's STUP-UD coz 'a fool' spelled backwards is LOOFA and those bars are so scrub you should USE ONE!! him known as a great, HE'S KIDDIN those are CHEAP WRITTENS you should LEAVE SPITTIN coz the odds of you getting better 'cloudy with a chance of meatballs' coz other then his name this 'monkey's bars' don't have any STEVE IN EM!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-13 19:02:08

yeah that was my fault , blame da weed lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-13 19:15:15

Good battle, My winner clean as always with the punches. Loser steppin up with about every verse I seen lately. Seen some creativeness from him that was a nice improvement. Still slightly a step behind the winner. Good read fellas. Fairs in. Keep Elevatin' Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-13 19:44:07

yesh sorry meant to say repaid is diaper backwards :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-13 19:48:54

Clear winner here, one brought in some elementary lines with 1 stand out bar. The other guy also had one stand out bar with overall better structure. Not a fan of the last line by the winner though. Nothing too exciting in this battle. Average at best. But fair vote in. No hate Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-13 21:19:25

palindromes are elemental ? oh ok , will make it more complex next time lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-13 21:46:03

seen way better from both ya'll this way tho Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-14 05:51:06

FGS READ MY EXPO !!!! don't judge something you wont understand unless you read it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-14 10:04:15

This was Extreemly close I'm giving it to this dude for his effort and switching it up loser was dope also it was hard decision fv no hate Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-14 10:04:35

steve, im liking the creativity here, and it was fresh and used for the most part decently.. the main thing here tho is the concept to its connection, still needs to be a bit clever or entrende'd if possible.. otherwise theyll come off as statementish... or use the palindrome as a concept it self, so ex.. i could rip this guy' by 'flippin my pots n pans' til his spine SNAPS AND STOP/ see how the concept IS a palindrome phrase... and you are 'flippin pots and pans' to attain the snaps and stop..anyway, highlights: full of shit, and step on no pets... lowpoints; whack bar skool, and snap n stop.. bleu-prett y straight, multis were consistent, concepts werent mindblowing here, you did what you thought was enough for the win... played it very safe... highlights-last name harvey, and gloryhole.. lowpoints-snake me, and drowned in the ocean... felt one was more direct and punches concepts were a bit more damaging imo.... Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-14 17:13:14

steveveom: Definitely Appreciate The Creative Approach You Took For This Verse. However, I Felt Like You Leaned A Little Much On The Creative Aspect And Didn't Really Have Any Hard Hitting Punches Or General Insults Towards Your Opponent. At The Same Time Though I'd Consider This An Experiment With Style So It's Understandable. I'd Say Keep Bringing That Creative Approach But At The Same Time Try To Hit Your Opponent With Harder Hitting Punches And You'll Be On The Right Track Man. Bleu: Overall I Liked Your Verse But I Felt Like You "Played It Safe" And Didn't Really Come With Your Best Material For This. I Can See The Mentality And You're Snipping But It's Not Always A Good Idea To Start Attacking Opponents Because They're Not Established In Order To Get Some Free Wins. It Just Doesn't Make You Look That Great Imo. Far As Your Verse Goes You Had A Punches But Nothing Really Stood Out For Me. I'd Just Say Come Harder Cause I Know You Can Especially After Reading Your Tournament Verse. Overall Battle: Felt Like The Winner Edged This With Harder Hitting Punches While The Loser Took A More Creative Approach Towards Their Verse. I Already Gave Advice To The Loser On What They Should Do And I Could See A Different Outcome Next Time. Nice Battle Here Fellas, Fair's In. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-14 19:36:45

One overshadowed the other here with a cleaner, more well put together verse. I'd take into mind what ILLo is saying, but most of those concepts just didn't work for me to begin with. The palindromes can only be as cool as they are relevant... I'd say go back to the drawing board and keep working on your concepts toward your opponents. Try using personals as well. Vote's in... Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-14 22:02:53

damm gb fellas fairs in Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-15 00:50:11

gb here but i felt that one should step up the multis and direct his punches more towards his opponent although the diaper line was coo Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-15 02:00:10

Fairs in...pretty entertaining scrap here...Steve had some original content imo...like errryone said so far, impressed with the palindromes as its not seen much...Blue, pretty much original bars too...many of ya punches hit hard due to well built concepts...no h8...vb... Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-15 02:19:52

Fb Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-15 15:34:04

Fair ones in Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-15 19:05:34

Just thought the winner was more consistent, hit harder and was generally the better battler, although loser has some creative concepts he just wasn't quite on the level needed. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-16 05:37:51

okay cause u did play on words don't mean it is hot i mean it shows you know the english language well but when it comes to make sense of ya bars it out there the person who got my vote made sense in my opinion Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2014-09-16 16:47:32

obviously it was 'above your pay grade' type for u joe ..battles are judged on wordplay and vocabulary as well as punches . try it sometime , you may even win a battle beaaaccchhh ! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-16 16:59:15