Clear winner to me Voted: yungPeter / djaygo
Posted on: 2014-09-12 06:51:24

Both were about the same level here. Very basic, but the concepts were there, just need to figure out how to get more complex with them. Out of the two, I felt my winner had the more creative disses. Both had some moments, but both had some played stuff as well. Nothin time and practice wont fix. Try to keep your concepts relevant to the times now, things that are happening around the world now, that will help you keep away from the played material. Anyways, fairs in fellas. Keep Elevatin' Voted: yungPeter / djaygo
Posted on: 2014-09-12 09:18:28

okay both peeps are new i see but one was more jab then nothing then finger and end. other emcee was just going on and not throwing any punches. not any jabs either. if both got the time to think of concepts as skill said that are relevant to the time. both work on gathering concepts towards a punch. they will improve. also wording your bars are key to survival here. you HAVE TO CAP YOUR RYMING LINES!! this is crucial here b/c more likely then not you will see that most people wont interpret the bars the way you see them. dont just make up the bars and not give emphasis to where the start and the finish is at. i'm not a fan of reading twice but most are and when they find that you had did that they will read a couple of lines and you will become ashamed of records or whatever. it is that most important to CAP YOU BARS. if working on wordplay which you guys clearly can get easily. id say using double meaning words or something like my fav. "WINDOW/WIN DOUGH" wording w/it like that not only leaves a sting to the end of your bar. it also creates a complex thought which in turn provides multiple ways you can incorporate those words. if using flow and multies you need to match sylables to get the full effect. if anything further pm me i am always busy but i get back to anyone's pm's. if you want to battle i always respond but sometimes it takes long to b/c i am busy anyone who makes a attepmt to send i have always replied. but you guys use that tool to easy succesion on here and try your best to stay active and keep your heads up. snoop around the site and dig into great battles where you can learn from here you both got the fiya. just #KEEP ELEVATIN' GB VB ON MY RECENTS! Voted: yungPeter / djaygo
Posted on: 2014-09-13 11:12:54

Close Voted: yungPeter / djaygo
Posted on: 2014-09-15 02:36:43

fv Voted: yungPeter / djaygo
Posted on: 2014-09-15 18:46:34