Add up = summing/addition ap pendix have no use.simple as that. Good luck. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-09 06:46:17

Just seen that my box don't look full but it said 8/8 lines and when i tried writing more it said 9.8, if people feel they're going to down vote me for that then don't as i will happily writ 2 more bars. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-09 07:16:21

Extra bar lmao: If you say hes won you must be all talk and kidding me, this guy aint got a chance of winning g, his wordplay is more 'forced' than luke skywalkers ability Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-09 12:57:42

Descent battle, had to read it a couples times, both had a bar that I like and both had some that wasn't hittin for me. One had forced wordplay and the other one had broken multies. Went with the mc who brought a lil more to the table IMO, he had the better attempts. Both need work on structuring the set up of their punches. •FV Keep Elevatin' Voted: J8E / Hostage
Posted on: 2014-09-09 13:19:42

this one was tough to call for me .. I had to read it a couple times. winner took it for being more consistent with his wordplay and attempts at punches. the way he structured his bars were better and they lead right into his swings with fluidity, while the loser lost me half way through his set-ups and I'd have to go back and read. Loser: You had some hot bars, structuring yourself more and making it more legible would be a big plus for you, and not trying to reach too much for your wordplay and punches.. I was getting lost here and there, and nothing was too hard to figure out but I had to read it again. Winner: You've got good wordplay and solid punches, incorporate some multis in here and there. good job yall entertaining. Voted: J8E / Hostage
Posted on: 2014-09-09 15:17:31

fv Voted: J8E / Hostage
Posted on: 2014-09-09 17:48:19

I agree this was a close battle guys and thanks for feedback but your reasoning is stupid to be abrupt. My set up for wordplay leads onto the next line by line and if you have to re-read the bars then you need to elevate yourself. If anything hostages wordplay is forced as fuck (although some is great) and you have to re-read that because it looks so messy. Please next time give genuine reasoning or examples so we can discuss. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-10 03:41:41

How come this guys banned? Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-11 01:49:39

Good Battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-09-12 00:45:39

Losers style was a little too choppy for me. Winner went straight for the kill. Voted: J8E / Hostage
Posted on: 2014-09-12 02:25:34

Tough battle... had to pick one... my loser just needed a little more something to win Voted: J8E / Hostage
Posted on: 2014-09-12 18:37:03