COFFIN DODGER vs J1ZA - Text Rap Battle - Battle Rap and Rap Battles at LetsBeef.com


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Length: 8 Lines

COFFIN DODGER (44%)

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Bristol, England, United Kingdom

J1ZA (56%) WINNER

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Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Wales, United Kingdom

COFFIN DODGER

see dis guys not too clever ,so i  got  a 'SLOW RYHME FA JIZA ' -all da folks 'Know' ya suck like a 'ho' and 'BLOW LIKE A GEYSER' , face it 'Bro' , ya got no 'Flow', compared to when I do more 'flips'and 'tricks'  than  a 'SHOW TIME TRAPEZER !! ' // see jeez ya like a bad diver ...'YA FLOP EVERY NIGHT' , and like a 20 watt lightbulb ' YA NOT VERY BRIGHT '...and when ya come wid bars ya like like a flyweight getting KO'd ... 'YA DROP VERY LIGHT ' - like da song says 'Your my brother' ... but ' YA NOT HEAVY ..RIGHT ??' /  see I always win , so I say wid a 'scowel' chuck in da 'towel as da ref steps in to 'STOP EVERY FIGHT !!'

J1ZA

so you got 'tricks'? i'll jump on my 'board' and leave you 'TRE FLIPPED', how can you 'write that i'm a homo' in those 'GAY SCRIPTS' i 'pack more 'bullets' than 'K CLIPS', you'd have to be reaching for 'top shelf porn' to talk about 'EXTENDED MAGS', you write like a 'hipster' but i don't care what the 'NEXT TREND IS FAG', i'm not really down for this fam on FAM VIOLENCE, so why don't you just 'shut the fuck up' you'd get more votes for some DAMNED 'SILENCE', you the type to say you ROCK BEATS, MAN, WHICH? 'faggots' more likely to see you on the internet eating a 'COCK MEAT SANDWICH'

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Battle started: September 4^th 2014 at 15:42
Challenger joined: September 4^th 2014 at 16:21

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2014-09-04 16:21:53).

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COFFIN DODGER	lol nice one fam , done this as a reply to that 8 ya dropped , but someone beat me to it so sent it to you instead... Comment Only Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:25:43
MiD-NiGht <WS> Basic Member	stevenom look what I did to your boy BIG DICE, Fair is on the way. Comment Only Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:27:19
COFFIN DODGER	btw song was 'he aint heavy , he's my brother ' .. Comment Only Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:27:26
J1ZA Basic Member	gb fam, i don't agree with inter crew battles as ranked battles but hey, when challenged i will always drop Comment Only Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:31:47
COFFIN DODGER	yeah I battle pretty much anyone ..but we got a lot of members , and battles get jumped on quick so took it anyways lol Comment Only Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:33:24
TRILLUMINATI Basic Member	think the winner took the lead having an attempt at a punchline and wordplay every line ... loser had more multis but less punchlines. Voted: COFFIN DODGER / J1ZA Posted on: 2014-09-04 16:40:03
Loonatic	Lol sibling rivalry at At it's finest. Amusing shit. Comment Only Posted on: 2014-09-04 23:52:44
FatMan Jersey Basic Member	My winner just impressed me more with his mutli's, this could go either way though. Voted: COFFIN DODGER / J1ZA Posted on: 2014-09-05 04:39:28
Obey <AC's> Rookie Champion	Both need improvements. Lets start with Steve, your rhyming is really forced and your concepts are really bland and predictable for the most part. When you go through lines, you want to read them fluidly and if you got mismatching multis it takes away from the readability. You used ''YA'' in 4 of your multi sets in a row, that's not a good thing. I can see your attempts at concept connection but it's really vague for the most part. Take your time, read some of the GC battles and get an idea. J1ZA, your multis are a little better in terms of matching up, but their very dr. seuss-ish and low syllabled. Your concepts were fairly better and seemed to connect easier, but also were vague at points and very predictable also. I'm going w/ the one who barely skimmed by on all these points I'm making. Good luck to both in the elevation, the fair's in fellas. Voted: COFFIN DODGER / J1ZA Posted on: 2014-09-05 16:08:19
COFFIN DODGER	ok , I got ya ......oh , ooops lol thx for da feedback Comment Only Posted on: 2014-09-05 16:19:34
King Bobby	lol'd at cockmeat sandwich Voted: COFFIN DODGER / J1ZA Posted on: 2014-09-05 22:23:13
remarK <LIT>	This battle was really lack luster. I don't think any of the punches hit here, guys. One had just a little more, though. Vote's in... Voted: COFFIN DODGER / J1ZA Posted on: 2014-09-05 23:59:51
Student	stevevenom: I Feel Like Your Multi's Were On Point I Felt Like You Could Improve On Your Vocabulary And Forming A Punchline. You Attacked Your Opponent But It Wasn't That Aggressive And Technically Correct. If You Learn To Use Punchlines And A Delivery System To Knock Your Opponent Out You Have To First Start With Creative Concepts And Connect Those With Punchline. PM Me If You Need Any Help Or Want A Further Explanation. Overall I Felt Like You Were Average But You Had Good Mult's. J1ZA: Felt Like You Have Two Good Punches But They're Overshadowed By The Filler In Your Verse. I Feel Like If You Cut Down The Filler And Brought More Creative Concepts You Could Best Really Great. Overall, Nice Battle Fellas. Fair's In. Voted: COFFIN DODGER / J1ZA Posted on: 2014-09-06 16:32:16
COFFIN DODGER	and oh yeah COREY K , look what I doing to YOU in our battle lol ! Comment Only Posted on: 2014-09-06 18:36:57
Jay_still Basic Member	Fairs in close battle, both were about even here, the flip was nice. Punches were a little harder. fairs in gb Voted: COFFIN DODGER / J1ZA Posted on: 2014-09-08 11:27:20


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