Clear winner. Better structured verse gets the W here. Loser should check out the apprentice thread to help himself elevate. •FV• Keep Elevatin' Voted: Venomous Spitta / SHARK BOY_
Posted on: 2014-08-16 12:19:23

White rain though...but yeah winner had the better verse all round I think. Props for this battle having the title of a sci fi film too yo. Fair one Voted: Venomous Spitta / SHARK BOY_
Posted on: 2014-08-16 14:28:52

Mangina kept the rhyme the whole time and again Shark Toy syas shit that might sound good in audio, but to the comprehensive mind, aka smart people, shit be illegible like heath ledgers head that spilled. WHAT Voted: Venomous Spitta / SHARK BOY_
Posted on: 2014-08-17 05:00:15

ok well im betting when i cast my vote eryone has gone one way due to how the dude has written his verse and they probably havent actually read the verse .... to my loser CAPPING WORDS should RHYME WITH EACH OTHER ... these are called multies so sylabels match simple expo of this goes something like this ........... stop SPITTING SHIT RHYMES before is start to WHIP HIM WITH MINE those two capped sections show how multies work they are a set of 4 syllable rhymes .... based on what is here one was completely incoherent and made no fucking sense ... my other dude my winner ya shit was mad basic one word rhyming at the end of ya lines you need to come on leaps and bounds from that if your going to seriously challenge on here ... anyways fairs is in learn form this ... .:X:. Voted: Venomous Spitta / SHARK BOY_
Posted on: 2014-08-17 08:51:14

okay.."spatially" BULLET HOLES BATTER his Anti-symmetrical (facially) be missin his "coronary arteries" NARROWLY watchin his big brain SPLATTER anti-metrical....thi s whole bit really threw me for a loop lol, not to be a dick but it does not make much sense to me..i get the narrow arterie bit but the rest, wtf lol... and the whole verse really didnt make much sense... the other did NOT come that hard but due to making sense and having one or two punches i understood....fvz in yinz// Voted: Venomous Spitta / SHARK BOY_
Posted on: 2014-08-19 17:20:33