My advice to both of you is re-read your verses before posting them and see if it makes sense reading it back some of ya puns where kinda of point and irrelevant to help that your build ups to the punch need to be relevant as well this all helps make sense of your verse .... FV Voted: Violent Conqueror / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2014-08-08 17:13:23

??? x, you realize your comment didnt even make sense right? where kinda of point??? wtf are you talking about Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-08-08 17:29:29

my entire verse was painting a picture of taking my enemy, putting them in my trunk, driving upstate, and burying them in the ground because of shit they did and said to me. im not sure what you mean about it not making sense? i told a whole story. slow down on the crack, x! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-08-08 17:31:53

Winner had the better punches mixed with multis. Stronger battle verse. Loser had a descent concept. But failed to land any real hard hits. Story telling in battles is tricky, you have to make it a point to land solid disses while your doing it. That just wasn't the case here. GB though, Keep Elevatin' Voted: Violent Conqueror / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2014-08-08 18:01:37

Violent, stop with the garbage trash-talking in the comments. If someone votes against you, they vote against you. And for the record, no not all your punches made sense. All that aside, fair vote in. The winner here had better battle bars in general with good punches, but like X said both of them had off point lines. One of them is just in a different league. Loser has potential with multis and his mild understanding of punches definitely wasn't bad per se, but could use work. Voted: Violent Conqueror / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2014-08-08 18:09:25

i didnt comment on the fact that he had jay as the winner. jay came hard, especially with the rent the v line...that wasnt my point....i was simply stating that his "opinion" didnt make ANY sense...and it still DOESNT make sense...it isnt trash talking, its intelligence. how are you going to say that my words dont make sense and that i should re-read my shit before i submit, and then say something so DUMB like where kinda of point? stop dick riding terra, and yes, all of my punches made sense..skill made a good point in stating that i didnt make any solid disses to my opponent. but all of my rhymes went together and made complete sense. i dont mind losing the battle, i mind when ignorant fucks like you have some stupid shit to say in the comments. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-08-08 18:46:05

nice battle fellas keep up the good work both were pretty sik i just feel the winner landed more punches keep up the sick work lads Voted: Violent Conqueror / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2014-08-09 05:44:50