one was clearly better than the other ... to my loser look at your oppenants verse see the capped words there called multies these and multi sylabel rhymes which help the flow and execution of your verse once you have these down you then need to work on your metaphors and punches ... to my winner you got the ulties bro but they are kinda irrelvant and it appears your rhyming just for the sake of rhyming try working on getting your multies to build up to your punch at the end of your line if its not on point or leading to your punch its just filler for you to step up to the next level thats what you need to focus on... either way both keep it up FV .:X:. Voted: ricospillzus / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2014-07-28 18:54:17

Stevevenom good work bro! THE BROTHERHOOD! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-07-28 19:08:34

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Posted on: 2014-07-29 16:57:03

One was clearly better than the opponent here. Very one sided and I dont even think this causes or too much of a breakdown. Even tho my winners multis didnt fit too well in certain spots, I feel like he had much strongers concepts and better hard hiting punches with also well connecting setups. The loser here should read the tutorials posted on the site to learn how to create a stronger verse. Fv in. Voted: ricospillzus / COFFIN DODGER
Posted on: 2014-07-31 16:47:34