very one sided to my loser your need to get off the one word rhyming and start using multi syalbel rhymes if you read your oppenants verse evrything capped is a multi and if you read them youll see how they rhyme with each over this improves the flow and complexity of your verse but multies are good enough on there own you need some clever puns and metaphors and personals to back it up id suggest not posting opens until your are more established pick out some individuals to battle hone in thos basics ... to my winner nice multies and good flow ya just need to work on getting some puns in ya verse that hit and arent feeble .... FV .:X:. Voted: The Medicine Man / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2014-07-28 09:23:59

my winner just all around better verse and i like a couple of his lines fairs in im out no hate Voted: The Medicine Man / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2014-07-28 12:08:28

thanks for the advice X. I appreciate it! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-07-28 20:13:28

This was a very one sided match. Overall one just had the multis, punches, flow and overall just the harder hitting concepts. just needs to work on that wordplay and knowing how to set each one up better imho. Some were hit and a miss but overall it wasnt too bad. My loser has to work on actually creating concepts and forming them properly and usefully into his multis and rhyming the syllables. Good luck to you both. Voted: The Medicine Man / JayImmortal
Posted on: 2014-07-31 15:50:27