both have work to do. One more so than the other. Winner had the more coherent lines in his drop but needs to work on his game some more and sort out his multis too. Your multis have to match with rhyme and syllable count too. Fairs in, I'm out. Voted: JayPrince / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-07-25 10:48:58

I saw no clear case of wordplay from neither my winner, nor loser. As far as vocab is concerned, my winner's got it, but again, my loser isn't far behind. My winner came in straight on metaphors, a little rough but they're there, whereas my loser just came in raw--But the lack of metaphors didn't give in any of that "zazz" LB likes. For multis, one clearly outshined the other but they need work. But ultimately, punches win the battle... And I've seen them both come in harder before. The fair vote's in. Voted: JayPrince / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-07-25 15:53:03

very close battle Voted: JayPrince / Proctologist
Posted on: 2014-07-27 00:00:32