Good luck man Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-07-21 16:01:49

accidental so in "so when these niggas PEEP 'BOWS CONCEPTS, BITCH!" my apologies... Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-07-21 16:12:16

Flows on point for both, schemes were ok as well. However, one had more effective punches. Some concepts lacked proper execution but came off decent enough to land effectively. Wording is KEY, gentlemen. Ensure before you move on to the next bar, that your concept is clearly executed in a precise and harsh manor. A lot of people tend to lay down a concept on the 1st take and leave it. Try and work with the concepts structure, and see which is the most harsh and effective way to deliver that concept. All in All, one lacked hard bangers while the other had a few jabs land effectively. If you are incapable of dropping HEYmakers, then ensure your jabs are consistent enough to over power the opposition. Anyways, cool battle fellas, keep writing. I got the winner with a better verse conceptually & effectiveness as well as consistency. Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-21 16:28:29

Very close match.. one came wit alot of complex multi schemes.with a few punches that were nice as jabs but didnt lack enuf creativity to dwell into haymaker category.. one also had alot of jabs.. abit cleaner and less fillerish.. and consistently kept coming... remember to take into account what the battle length is and adjust your bars accordingly to get the most bang for your buck.. felt that one didnt utilize that aspect efficiently and brought down an otherwise decent verse... setups were fairly relavent to both..... but leaning this way. Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-21 22:13:00

Loser was decent, winner was a lil better and made me LoL on some of his punches. More entertaining smoother verse all around, imo. ~1~ Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-22 01:36:32

^Co-sign. Fairs in, I'm out. Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-22 13:10:28

Ahhhh, I feel like one had a very choppy styled of multi's here, and my winner had a much better flow to his. Although one picked it up more towards the middle of the verse, I feel like my winner had more consistency throughout. The level of playing field was about even with concepts being equally hard on both sides. The ending game w/ my winner also seemed to pick up really nicely. The losers ending was a real letdown with the last concept, it really wasn't a hard hitting concept overall imho. Anyways, keep at it yall. Gb, Fv In. #BeLikeSkizzo Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-23 00:42:58

lol this was funny to me.. that reach his toes line flowed nice... and that mosquito line was pretty dope... what sealed it for me was the rainbow line lovely name play and a strong finish to that line!!! Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-23 09:38:49

Nice drop here from both i went with my winner because he felt a bit more creative than my loser had some more complex both had highs and lows,good show fellas fairs in return it. Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-23 18:46:46

Shit was ok I guess dam Lockhart u still on here lol what happened to all ur titles brah lol but yea shit was coo read Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-23 22:12:44

Dis was kinda obvious here, my winner edged it wit' a consistency of punches, my loser seems like he wasn't himself on dis one. No h8. #KEEPGRINDIN' Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-23 23:39:29

very close Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-24 04:29:05

winner was consistently better overall , both had some goos bars though / Voted: Shodan /
Posted on: 2014-07-24 15:51:45