not too bad for new battlers on the site but conclude my winner cus more rhyming and had sum wordplay. Voted: hurtless_heart / HeJustTalkItGood
Posted on: 2014-06-30 12:29:52

Very basic here. One of you knows how to multi rhyme and make the verse more readable. Punches were almost not there both of you need to become more complex. I'd advise you to click on that tournament icon and read some battles to get the idea of how things work around here. Stay up Voted: hurtless_heart / HeJustTalkItGood
Posted on: 2014-06-30 18:53:08

my winer had a strong opening and better punches good battle fv no hate Voted: hurtless_heart / HeJustTalkItGood
Posted on: 2014-06-30 19:59:10

that's all I ask a lil feed back thanks all 3 voters Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-06-30 20:48:11

Cap the rhymes for both, and winner had better bars, looser's flow was weak with to many stopping points Example: lol Voted: hurtless_heart / HeJustTalkItGood
Posted on: 2014-06-30 22:59:19

thanks Cornie Ice aye send beef lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-07-01 01:35:51

I found both pretty good, but as already mentioned, one had good bars and one had to work his flow, But still was a good battle! Voted: hurtless_heart / HeJustTalkItGood
Posted on: 2014-07-03 11:44:25