Wheel brake n tire crews/We'll break & tire crews/We'll break entire crews...the rest of the wordplay was self explanatory... LoD Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-06-17 16:59:15

good little spar but one side just went ham with they punches....pm if u want a expo...gb Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-17 18:59:43

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Posted on: 2014-06-17 19:42:41

Fidel Z & Rican vs Manhattan & Godbody [Illmania Tag Team Battle] Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-06-17 20:09:14

i thought this was a tough decision... the first half of my losers verse was ill wit them personals, 2nd half was iiight nothing impressive. My winner's verse was more consistent throughout & i simply preferred more punches. fairs in. ~1~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-06-18 02:55:25

felt both had up and downs, a few word combinations didnt read correctly in one of their meanings, i also been seeing some wordplay thats been used before, which is fine, but the angles werent creative enough to help boost them... punchwise, both had some decent flips .. SOME HIGHLIGHTS FROM MM VERSE-the motor boating mermaids was aigh, G NEED DEVOTE wording was awkwardly done how does a genie devote to folks? i thought genie only is devoted to aladin.eskimo black market was prolly your next decent attempt, cept the organ iced, was forced , organ ized is the proper pronunciation... SOME LOWPOINTS FROM MM- two piece like BIKINIS IN VOGUE? this was pretty poor tbh, bringing down heat=anything to do with lebron james, dwayne wade, etc.. is played to hell, HIGHPOINTS FOR LOD-signatureof cave men, was decent, novice mechanics in teams , the whole setup of rarely SCANNING EM JEANS.. flow on it was nice,, SOME LOW POINTS- the syria's if we taliban, wouldve been nice cept, the second meaning reads forced...and loses strength because of it, same with the buybull wordplay.. reads fine one way but doesnt in the other.. alien to yall-visitors in spaceships, is too obvious of a connection...using alien=space ship,, try to word it so it relates but a clever or in a different angle... its like sayin 'ima doggin yall, on some BUNS IN BALL PARKS, anyway, this came down to entertainment and slightly better readability imo... close but leaning this way. Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-18 04:32:09

Rican: I actually like the genie/Aladdin bar. your opener would have been dope to me but i remember daddio using the out of limb concept similar to urs relating to Tarzan. Nuclear/new clear isn't pronounced like that, but prolly it does in ur country so not holding that against you...overall you came with some dope punches. Fidel z: I really like ur spooky culture bar. Not to fan of name plays but you executed well. Love the fact that you used recent events such as World Cup and bball finals implemented in both of ur bars....Manhattan: I like ur cavemen line. The bible wordplay is hella played tho...overall punches were there. God body: love how you continued manhattans scheme. Also ur flow and rhyme schemes throughout, while including concepts and punches. Best illmania text battle!!! Pretty sure I recognize Rican and pulses style correctly lol correct me if I'm wrong..... Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-18 10:17:48

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Posted on: 2014-06-18 11:28:19

one team flowed better. both were even in terms of punch count. no real haymays throwed. decent. Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-18 14:25:42

I'd like to start with: DUFRESNE is pronounced "doo-frane"... Right, so this was a really dope read. Ups and downs evident in both sides, I'd confidently say that one was superior scheme-wise, in terms of their consistency and complexity but the continuity of their initial scheme lead to some forced and awkward multi placements that hurt the cadence and readability of their verse yet pulling off some good punches within that upkeep was impressive. This particular verse fell off near the middle-end of the verse: Near the very end, punch impact began to spike and I was interested again. The other verse went with a safer approach somewhat, higher punch density that sacrificed punch power and set-up relevance. Not much of a personal element to their verse and basic scheme-work used throughout. Consistency was strong, whereas I felt the other verse lagged slightly in the middle-end. Punch density takes this and in certain areas, their punch impact topped the opponent. My loser's verse here certainly had more of a structurally interesting verse with superior scheme-work but I felt like they didn't maintain a higher enough level of consistency to trump their opponents based on the readability factor. Vitty's vote's in. Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-18 14:42:25

both of u cats went in, but my winner slightly edged it wit' da closer IMO. Respect 2 both #KEEPGRINDIN' Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-18 15:22:13

voted the wrong way... Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-06-18 15:30:02

D.O.P.E Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-18 15:48:39

Doope Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-18 15:49:58

dam sick ass battle be back to vote hopefully Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-06-18 20:57:42

Fairs in, Great battle hear, Good read from both, one was more consistent in my eyes Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-19 12:05:55

Hell of a battle right here. I just felt my winner was more polished and edged out his opponent in every way. Both did great though. FV Voted: Godbody /
Posted on: 2014-06-19 16:42:03