ill send 8 in 20 mins Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-22 04:49:19

diamond base = baseball bases Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-22 05:16:45

F 1. Fill the box. Voted: Tab3rkalosis / Jamese
Posted on: 2014-05-22 08:42:26

Fairly big expo. Bear with it. First up voters need to start fucking voting fairly! Wtf is this "F1" what does that tell anyone? I understand as an inexperienced battler its hard to comment on some of the battles but FUCKING COME ON HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT IF I LEFT A VOTE LIKE THAT!! Right this could be taken as swaying but fuckit. Winner imo had a better crafted verse I say better crafted as there was at least half decent rhynes and attempts at punches but they were setup and crafted and executed all wrong so lacked the impact. For example the first line you could have said "leave you wit scars like WAR WOUNDS when you fave a vet like me YOUR THROUGH" something like that...bad and basic example but ya wanna think of something that relates to your setup in this case scars/war wounds. Loser.. Voted: Tab3rkalosis / Jamese
Posted on: 2014-05-22 16:38:48

some of ya rhynes didnt really rhyme I could see ypu were rhyming acapella with good fella...really only the last bit rhymes (pella/fella) so if your gonna do that do it like this accaPELLA/////FELLA ypi gotta up the complexity of your rhymes too eg diamond base/like bonds face...that doesnt rhyme perfect but its close enough (diamond im assuming your pronouncing die-mund) just a littleexpo to give ya both some basic ideas. Hit up me or any more experienced guys that can help you out/join a good crew/go on the forums/pay ya exclusive membership and use chatbox etc...it all helps trust me. I went from a complete noob at rap to the level im at now in 6 months. Sure im no heavyweight but I gey better each day...fairs in..take it in. peace Voted: Tab3rkalosis / Jamese
Posted on: 2014-05-22 16:47:14

i filled the box as much as i could Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-23 23:51:17