my first fight i verse the second for this month :P fml can you gimme some tips like is my rhyming scheme right (sorry for this) Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-16 11:40:58

Just tossing out a fair vote. Take the advice Bryan and watch for the rhymes, make sure they work. Just for example, the heart out/aren't felt line just doesn't work. Also, fill up the text box completely to take advantage of the room you're given. Voted: insomnia¢ / Saxx
Posted on: 2014-05-16 11:41:05

I'm not exactly great either Bry, so don't sweat it, but if you want me to help just pm me and I'll answer later. Voted: insomnia¢ / Saxx
Posted on: 2014-05-16 11:41:56

thanks TerraByte sorry for the trouble but can you explain why the heart out and arent felt line doesn't work thank you :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-16 11:44:33

PM me if ya like. I only took it to keep my #2 spot safe. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-16 11:44:39

one was short n inadequate. fv. vote back on my latest battle Voted: insomnia¢ / Saxx
Posted on: 2014-05-18 05:55:09

Dammm, Saxx dissed dude by copying his bar format...Not only did Saxx do that, (and play a note) but he made the other dude play his skin flute...fairs in (no homo) Voted: insomnia¢ / Saxx
Posted on: 2014-05-19 23:14:58

I wasn't hating on you Bryan, just being silly man...Just work on structure. You could learn from your oppenent (well, honestly not this battle, he sucked cock on this battle, he was just being a shit brick) but check out him and some vets...it can help you out bro Voted: insomnia¢ / Saxx
Posted on: 2014-05-19 23:15:56

yeah i know i got killed on this, check out this tho any tips will help thanx #477803 Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-20 04:25:49