One verse was much better structurally with smoother setups/punches and much cleaner multis. FVs in Voted: Tab3rkalosis /
Posted on: 2014-05-12 13:03:30

Obvious snipe here, the loser could use work in most elements. Try to work on rhyming first, then build up more on concepts to give more of a better quality to your bars. The winner was alright, generally better with multi's and concepts than his opponent and that's what got him the win. Going to spare the elevation tips, as this was a snipe. Voted: Tab3rkalosis /
Posted on: 2014-05-12 22:46:32

One needs to work on his multi game, along with setting up a punch more effectively. he should pay attention tohow a verse is delivered and understand how to make his multies morecomplex while being relevant with a concept towards the bar. Other clearly showed a more advanced understanding on what to bring and took it with experience and a over all better script. Keep grindin Voted: Tab3rkalosis /
Posted on: 2014-05-13 02:29:34

Whatup Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-13 16:27:48

Low vote removed. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-05-13 18:20:29

one was better here and it was shown, clearly. ma loser jus didn bring much here, needs to up tha bar a bit, ma winner, tho a snipe, needs to focus on not 'forcing tha issue' w/ tha multie sets. Voted: Tab3rkalosis /
Posted on: 2014-05-15 11:03:39