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Posted on: 2014-05-02 02:44:48

Nice battle. simple and short but some unique wordplay by both of ya. liked the steven seagull line lol Voted: Bnas / Anti-Virus
Posted on: 2014-05-02 03:21:26

Barzilla: Your flow was a bit off because of the broken multi's, and you didn't have any real punchlines as a basis for the structual sound-ness of your verse. When stringing multi's make sure that each individual syllable not only match up number wise (eg: CON-SCIOUS being two syllables and NAU-TIOUS being two syllables) but that each individual syllable rhymes with it's counterpart multi's. I know you can string them, and i know you are just sniping these guys but it's still good to know. Black: Your multi's weren't bad, but they were basic. Try upping the syllable counts to those of which that "COUNTRY OF MALAYSIA" bar was, but instead of breaking the multi by having the "NUTTY'S BACKTERIA" (which doesn't rhyme) actually structure some well rounded multi's using the syllable method I placed above. Once you've done that start thinking of concepts to incorporate some more punchline-esque bars and you'll be sound. Gb though, one took this on consistency, even though both had below-average verses imo. Voted: Bnas / Anti-Virus
Posted on: 2014-05-05 12:08:52