SCHEME = PETER GRIFFIN QUOTE - Expo: Derrick Jeter plays baseball typo 'smash his throws 4 practice'... Good shit homie. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-19 21:41:24

Both nice but I had a clear winner here after 1 read yo, fv Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-19 21:57:01

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Posted on: 2014-04-19 22:29:01

very good spar IMO. feel both had a nice flow, good use of multies, punches were properly set up and both had some creative concepts. a quotable from both. WIZ: The creatures sniffin coke and the seizure vicim line was my favorite. ROW: the dry cleaners line and the cold feet reference were my favorite. overall this was a close battle.. feel one edged it with a more unique verse that stayed more consistent and the concepts were more creative. fairs in fellas. good spar. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-19 22:49:51

Felt my choice executed stronger and i felt his wording was slightly better although ive seen him produce better bars.. Overall close good spar.. Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-19 22:54:21

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Posted on: 2014-04-19 23:25:28

Cool Story Wiz.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-20 02:15:46

Great close scheme battle. Both brought vet-expected set ups, punches, multi-use and wordplay. That being said, both had some wordplay that fell short in not being fully effective in every punch, not to say some of the wordplay was pretty much right on, so thats a toss up. I was feeling the tightness of one's bars a bit more even though he had a few less setups that strategy eliminated more filler to show of his scheming in this case. Really good work by both and definitely a toss up, so RESPECT 2 yall's pen game, but there can only be one.... FV in. Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-20 11:33:05

da kid wiz was cold all the way through his flow...i almost picked Row,because of a few lines that had literally had me laughin'. Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-20 12:48:29

Close battle felt alitte to one side with wordplay and punches mutlis were both about even all in all winner just had a sleight better flow good battle! Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-20 20:12:32

Both were able to maintain the scheme but my winner was a overall cleaner read. Multis seemed more functional which led to better set ups and slightly harder punches. Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-20 22:02:58

votes in. Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-21 11:40:26

good bout, winner took it with more relevant concepts leaning both towards his set-up and his punch. along with showing more creativity and originality. fairs in. Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-22 01:30:41

This was a GREAT example of what a TEXT BATTLE SHOULD BE! I can't give any "feedback" as it was above my current skill level in my opinion...I think I would have lost to either...Really nice read guys, BUT I have to choose a winner. (IF MY WINNER WANTS TO KNOW WHY I CHOSE THEM - MESSAGE ME PLEASE!) It was based on a specific bar (2 lines) that I had to vote with...But still giving even numbers yo! SAVEMONEY!! Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-22 02:26:48

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Posted on: 2014-04-22 04:16:17

Wiz: Overall, it was an entertaining read. I feel the wordplay and punches weren't as strong as your usual top-game, considering a lot of the battle obviously is being directed by the scheme; not the most versatile scheme at that. In places, your wordplay worked smoothly with the punch and in other cases, it was forced. The cedar/oak line was very dull, while being intelligent, it wasn't something that had a place in a rap battle. A few multies in there were a little uncomfortable but you made it through a retained a large amount of power within the punches. Row: Your verse was an uneasy read. A lot of the multies were forced and uncertain. The few wordplay attempts (Low is wiz/under where) were cringe-worthy to be honest dude. The term "low is Wiz" was extremely forced and the punchline was terrible. Not a great use of box space. I personally detest any wordplays that involve two words in separate sentence fragments, it's a cop-out. Dope with the "flow" - in reference to water is one of the most amateur references you can make. All in all, some of the schemework was haf-decent and there were a few jabs in there that had some conceptual credibility but overall, it was a disappointing verse. The winner is based on better wordplay/punches and a better use of the scheme. It was a fairly easy choice. Good battle fellas. Vitty's vote's in. Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-22 10:19:34

close..one was cleaner to me and more crisp....good shit yall Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-22 12:00:41

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Posted on: 2014-04-22 12:28:16

both drop dope verses ... got lot of concepts and punchs .. but i felt one harder Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-22 14:25:41

Both stuck with the scheme throughout the entire 16 lines which earns extra credits. One's flow was much smoother. Both incorporate punches and creative wordplay. one started out with a self hype which didn't do anything for me tbh. I'm voting based on ones double punches which I find had a lil more creativity and complexity. But the loser did have more complexity and creativity in his wordplay. Mid to high in no particular order. Fair vote. UFVC Voted: Wizdumb /
Posted on: 2014-04-22 17:27:09