feel one really needs to correct some of his multies and come up with some better concepts and execute them more properly. punches werent reallt there at all from one. the other had the idea of concept usage but fell short of proper usage and the set up were choppy at times. all in all i feel one took this with an over all better verse. fairs in fellas. Voted: COLT /
Posted on: 2014-04-16 12:45:13

Good battle. One had decent ideas for concepts and wordplay, but his multi game was off for the vast majority of the verse and was not appropriately executing rhymes in the forms of clear set ups and punches. In other words, it was way overcomplicated and needs to get the concepts and punches across to the readers more as well as work on rhyming (the first half was shaky as far as non-rhyming words and CAP'd words that were not multis...no hate). The winner here was much more simple, but effective with his use of multi scheming and internal rhyming withing his set ups and punches, but could have used more concepts and wordplay to make it a stronger verse as I have seen from him in the past. RESPECT 2 both, keep elevatin'. FV in. Voted: COLT /
Posted on: 2014-04-17 09:35:42

felt like one had more punches and the other had multies executed both had good mets i'm going for the one with the most punches nice drop guys... Voted: COLT /
Posted on: 2014-04-18 03:34:00

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Posted on: 2014-04-18 03:50:19

one seemed to just force alot of multies together, he didnt really show any originality or creativity to be brief, he should study up on what exactly he should be aiming for, the other showed more of an understanding, but still lacked wording concepts how he should, room for elevation is present for both. fairs in. Voted: COLT /
Posted on: 2014-04-19 21:28:16