Row goin for top ten dis month nice yo Voted: paradoxfromthebay /
Posted on: 2014-04-02 23:56:14

one should fill the box more and incorporate a better structure for his verse as well as add some better concepts , set ups and finish with stronger punches. other matched the quantity of bars but had harder punches and incorporated better concepts. Fairs in fellas. Voted: paradoxfromthebay /
Posted on: 2014-04-03 01:55:53

One needs to study up, learn what to bring and fill the box, self hype in a battle isn't somethin that will work to your advantage, i'd suggest you read more experienced dudes battles, ask around for advice and grasp what you need to bring to win a battle, the other obviously sniped out a win, although he didnt bring much at all, it almost costed him the loss but he brought hard enough hits to out-weigh his contender's script, although not filling the box against an easier opponent still isn't the way to go imo.. none the less, fair's in. Voted: paradoxfromthebay /
Posted on: 2014-04-03 02:02:01

What do y'all mean fill the box more? Didn't I use the correct # of lines / bars? Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-03 03:12:21

LOGIKK you suggested asking for advice... but I don't know what advice to ask for. Do you have any suggestions in particular? Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-03 03:17:43

"FUCK U IN THE ASS" nigga u gay! Voted: paradoxfromthebay /
Posted on: 2014-04-05 19:15:34