Expo: Roger's from American Dad, Rwandan refugees had to flee and hide in the 90s to escape from the Rwandan Genocide. GL and FV famz Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-01 19:35:24

Jack in the box Is a burger place and the spokesman is a guy with a big ass clown head. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-01 20:17:10

& a boxers a type of dog lol, forgot tht 1 Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-01 20:19:07

One's opener didnt really leave much of a hit, his concept, imo, isn't broad enough for some people to understand as its a slang term for a different meaning. he followed threw with sub-par lines, decent concepts after the first mess up but seemed to run out of steam at the end, the closing bar he used i wasn't really feeling due to him forcing in more multies then he really needed to, the ending concept didnt match the punch too well on both ends, the other came with a more creative and original opener, mid verse he held it down pretty decent with smooth delivery. something his contender seemed to lack a bit in. his closer also wasn't what it should of been, he executed delivery nice up till the end, although he finished with a more original concept, the wording hurt em. fair's in Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-01 20:35:09

ET- im liking your simple approach to your bars, one bar setup one bar punchline,, definite elevation here, i also liked the fact that you tried to stay relavent towards your end concepts, which is a definate plus... my advice is to try and get a lil stronger in the concept /to flips, similar to your make moves/ sitting at a stop light punch... very effective , just maintain that type of humor...highlights/ SITTING AT A STOP LIGHT, and probably the CHICKENS AT A COCK FIGHT... lowpoints/smacked in the chops, and jack in the box.... both kinda fell off ...seems like you tried to form a connection wit the jack concept, but 'beef wit me clown' doesnt flip well wit =don t put jack in the box, whos jack? why would he put jack in a box if he wants beefwit you? it seems like you kinda forced it in there to complete the relavency...imo... other than that good verse..... Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-01 21:49:12

Jack in the box refers to jack shit. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-01 21:52:18

Don't put jack (shit) in the box. Sometimes we say "he didn't do jack" meaning he didn't do jack shit. Or "i looked inside, but there wasn't jack" . Get me? Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-01 21:54:07

WIZ-seems like you a bit rusty, from last time i saw you droppin battles...just from your first bar, im seeing filler, setup talks bout your opponent's demeaner, then it switches up to you talkin bout his bitch... try to stay relavent, wit the same idea thruout, as a punch its ok , and wouldve possibly hit harder if there was a visual to go wit the description.... next bar, a bit better wit somewhat relavence, talkin bout dude claimin he been in fights but only 'reachin' wit his stories... actual end concept(reachin wit his shots')to its connection/flip(MIDG ETS IN A BAR FIGHT) works well, problem is tho, alot of the midget punches are pretty played..this one was jabbish at best... last bar again, i see no real relavence, setup wise to your rwandans, in the 90s...as a personal nameflip, it is effeective... and works... definately stay away from these irelavent multis/setups.... Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-01 22:02:24

taking your expo into consideration @ET, i get what your saying, wit jack=shit... problem is tho, it seems like a sudden stop mid sentence when reading it in terms of the second meaning... meaning one: so dont put jack, in the box... works... but then when going wit meaning two: dont put JACK IN THE BOX... doesnt work... wouldve worked had you said, how is this 'clown showin me beef' when he aint 'JACK,' IN THE BOX.../ Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-01 22:16:09

feel like both had punches that were about even imo, so it came to one being a tad more consistent in another area...fairs in... Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-01 22:21:38

sway comments regarding other peeps votes needs to be adressed as a pm to the voter and not here... please refrain from that ......deleted.. Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-01 22:27:53

@Illokwent that wasn't a sway comment, that was a funny comment. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-01 22:45:26

close battle, no doubt. one started off slow but then picked it up, other was more consistent. winner wins by a cunt hair...fv is drop'd Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-02 09:56:15

close..fairs in Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-03 14:19:03

Consistency and execution took this one for me.. Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-03 23:05:45

Both of 'em suck in the starting. Whole battle was conceptual with no hard punches. fairs in... Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-04 06:53:44

MID TO HIGH no h8 one is getting better other is smacking rust off good spar fellas Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-04 15:04:12

yea Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-04 15:29:40

eh Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-04 19:00:27

Wish both yall could win. Top battle. Voted: ET the Refugee / Wizdumb
Posted on: 2014-04-04 19:01:23