I'm not feeling no real concept/ setup in both verses. Maybe one had some concepts but didn't do anything with it. The loser here had better flow but he seem to punch himself at the beginning there with that dick line. Winner only edge because of cleaner structure. I seen better from the winner concept and delivery wise. fair vote. No hate UFVC Voted: Danjer DRoss / Autograph
Posted on: 2014-03-24 23:01:22

I don't think you guys understood what I wrote..lol, not saying votes are bad! (don1t think that) The "dick" line is saying "call me a dick" as in "I AM A JERK, ASSHOLE, MOTHERFUCKER, etc" then multi'd it with Deep Throat (dick sucking) but Deep Throat is a CIA spy or a snitch...anyway, whatever..The response didn't even have any comebacks...(no hate) I think I am just tired, I woke up and started writing (hand written stuff) and then wrote some lines I had on random pages and then just QK'd from there...a FAIR is a FAIR! NO H8! only love...And Bleu, what do you mean "In Every Area" - This site and battling isn't just about "I'm gonna cut your throat and rape you" I just wanted a simple comedic drop...nothing more. If this was rapped on an audio, it would come out good, more than positive...I plan on using some of these lines on Sunday (my recording days) for me "Rags to Ditches" Demo....More feedback PLEASE? Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-03-24 23:45:15

Both nice yo, fv Voted: Danjer DRoss / Autograph
Posted on: 2014-03-25 11:41:39

One just simply came harder with every aspect in the text game, his opener was eye-catching an he followed threw his verse with concepts matching the hits leaving a decent script, the other had a alright flow but lacked the wording and structure needed to win this bout, keep elevatin an you'll be a problem. fairs in. PM me if u wantin a longer expo or a expo on a bar in particular, etc. Fairs in Voted: Danjer DRoss / Autograph
Posted on: 2014-03-25 12:23:38

@LOGiKK thanks man! Coming from you that means somethin' fam! I made top 10 finally this month! I know I am old skool, and some of the stuff I wrote some of the younger guys don't understand the "wordplay" but I just gotta' elevate like you said...But I think the word I am looking for is ADAPTATION - I need to ADAPT to the newer age, you feel what I mean? Be honest about it. Thanks for feedback!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-03-25 13:50:51

Can't vote on this battle auto Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-03-25 17:42:21

It's okay folks, hands down to AUTO - Took me off the top 10 list for March, ahaha...GB, it's already over! At least give me my 33% bitch! no h8 GB, next time Imma SLOW KEY your ass like a locksmith. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-03-25 18:37:13

gb Voted: Danjer DRoss / Autograph
Posted on: 2014-03-26 18:34:33

clear Voted: Danjer DRoss / Autograph
Posted on: 2014-03-27 12:42:26