**FED THA BEAST**--typo. ~1~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-03-10 01:26:15

feel one started off simple but it picked up. felt punches couldve came harder. other had a solid verse with more complexity and better concepts to support punches. fairs in fellas. Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-10 07:20:34

One showed improvement toward the end but it wasn't enough Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-10 09:37:46

I'll hammer these mcs nigga you can't touch this. Haha good battle fairs in Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-10 11:13:29

Fv Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-10 13:15:23

loser had crackin up at some of his bars lol good shit and very well structured imo but winner took it wit better connected punches and jus a bit more complex wit his concepts..good battle tho guys fairs in Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-10 16:25:25

Fair Vote gb! Winner Could have better setup but all around well played! loser i would like to see more multies. but other than that good job. Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-10 17:20:40

For a new guy the loser did quite well just needs his syllables to match and there were punches thrown which is unusual for a new guy so props. winner got this in every way. I gave score due to some of the multis being a bit too slanted but fairs in Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-11 09:04:56

Fv Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-11 11:54:22

One was gangster style but still had the punches...Even though he calls me a faggot and a retard, I still have to vote FAIR...(Unlike some) The non-winner is doing a really good job. Just need to get some multi's in there, and you could have taken this down I think. Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-11 15:13:55

NOTE to @Hostil - Simple punches like "Vile" "Bile" will make a reader stop reading (if they are non-fair voters) but still it is not interesting at the start. Just work on not being so "basic" and you will improve a LOT. Use some rhyme dictionaries too! I have one from NWA, and a Dr. Dre Rhyme book...You can find PDF's online. REALLY good shit! Good luck man! Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-11 15:19:50

one started slow and got better...other had his punches connecting a tad more...he underestimated his opponet tho...took it too lightly and almost lost IMO Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-11 16:32:39

Good stuff from both. Hostil had better lines Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-11 20:22:18

@SuperGuy...Do you understand how to vote? Actually, do you understand how to READ? Friend voting is frowned upon...For example I DO NOT LIKE "Tha Dope Man" Yet I voted for him based on his context and lined up skills...You havn't even battled - Seriously 10-8? If you think that *Hostil* was "Amazing" then you are going to start losing reputation and your votes will not count...Mods will probably remove your ignorant vote anyway (not hate against HOSTIL) but I think he would agree that you're an idiot. Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-12 13:46:02

i can feel the multies of dope man, and rhymin scheme that he uses, i find dope man verse more entertainin and its easy to flow on beat so my vote goes to dope man Voted: Hostil Morgue / The Dope Man
Posted on: 2014-03-12 21:38:23