GL Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-25 11:40:51

@PackFlow whats the full form of GL? ?:/ well best wishes to u too n nice lines. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-25 11:44:46

Good Luck, thanks Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-25 11:46:19

ok both had some ups and down in this battle which made it close. PackNFlow, I'm glad u put in the effort to learn and elevate. U are def better. Extra points for attempting wordplay, multi rhyme and structuring ur verse in bars. I see one or two broken multis for example NO CONTENDER(4 syllables)/ NO TENDER(3 syllable)/ BARTENDER(3 syllable) is Brocken, also BAR does not rhyme with NO... and LEMONADE does not rhyme with anything by AID Which u didn't cap.... UNDER THE WATER/ THUNDER MARAUDER = perfect multi rhyme.... ENEMIES/ HENNESY = perfect multi rhyme, I wanna see u do more of these.....farhad1425 I see u understand multis, ur next step is have some concepts in ur verse, make it clearer to understand.... Both were kinda experimenting with rhymes... One made a bit more sense but both have room to elevate.... Fair vote. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-26 05:11:27

fv Voted: PackNflow / farhad1425
Posted on: 2014-02-26 08:31:34

Thanks for the expo guys, The community definitely helpin me get tons better Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-26 09:35:30

TIGHT Voted: PackNflow / farhad1425
Posted on: 2014-02-28 07:45:24