Nice spar, fairs in fellas. Posted on: 2014-02-20 03:50:41

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Posted on: 2014-02-19 21:23:18

Lesbian wedding line and Cheetah line. Will be back to vote. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-19 22:16:22

Both went extremely hard but one just had a flow I was feeling more. GB both though. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-20 01:01:50

A cool battle. Both have their issues but there were some cool bars in here regardless. F2D Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-20 03:49:12

Both had issues but this was a close battle. Both were pretty much even though my winner edged it. Fairs in. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-20 03:56:16

nice one boys, one got the overall here Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-20 04:20:21

Defly reading again. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-20 04:25:27

Well, this was kinda straight for me. Both came up w/ some good lines while had some misses as well. Punch wise this was kinda close, I've seen better from you both. Both of you used some creative concepts here, appreciate that. Now, coming to the schemes to be honest I am fond of AAAA scheme, sometimes AB AB works out but I don't really like it while AB BA scheme I feel is too weird to use. It kinda disturbs wording and catching its flow is bit hard for readers in my opinion. My vote goes to an overall better verse in terms of punches, framing/structuring ,and cleanliness of scheme. Fair is in. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-20 04:26:15

One had better concepts and his build up was strong as well. I liked the nameplays. Thought he forced the multies sometimes as it didn't roll off smoothly when i said them aloud. Punches were decent too. I think the execution was a bit sloppy in some places. My loser was all over the place in my opinion. Concepts were nice,thought they needed to be more abstract. Punches were good,bit meh in some places. But honestly,this was close in the first read. I just thought that my winner took more criterias. Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-20 12:04:06

PHEN- okay your opener was very nice, id like to see more of those typea bars, from relavence in setup and retaining that idea to a nice concept to connection,, after that tho, your lengthy setups kinda resulted in a bit of filler that ended wit punches that were somewhat lacking... ex. your second bar, you started wit eating competition, and then towards the end it kinda fizzled... highlights : definately the lesbian wedding..and probably earthquake visits low points:wise cracks in your flow.. because you ended wit walk wit wisdom,word wise and wisdom are too redundant... to be used as a flip for each other.. and i scream..which i felt was pretty basic wordplay for your caliber..CAKE-i enjoyed the narrative style of writing. you did, what you need to do is improve on throwing strongetr concepts to punches as your doing your narrative.. multi usage was okay punchwise not really much to go off of, probably your highlights would be.. mom text back and commit murder..low points is the herburp, didnt care for the wordplay, a bit forced, and dave chapelle- felt my winner just had a bit better use of concept flipping... although not by much.. fairs in Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-21 04:04:38

one wasn't hitting for me, whether it was the concept or the execution the other was cool more consistent so the votes in. Return the love YahDigg?? Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-21 09:14:24

Ehhhh, tough to call... Definitely seen better from both emcees. Battle seemed rushed, is this for a Tourney? Anyway, I'm going with the one that had had more "stand out" bars... FV in Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-21 13:27:28

One was slightly better in all categories.. 1 Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-21 19:29:15

GB Voted: Apollyon /
Posted on: 2014-02-22 20:12:44