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Posted on: 2014-02-16 06:10:49

Snoopy flowed smoother. . Fv vb i got slept on battles Voted: DissnKuss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-16 06:37:22

One has a poorly worded script, he needs to make his concepts and punches stand out more, the way he jotted down his lines makes his whole verse all over the place. There's some punches that were swung, none really hit though. It would be beneficial to reconstruct how you write next time, text bouts are universal, meaning how it may sound to you as your writing it, will be different from how its comprehended to others. Keep a more simplistic style to show what you're going with. Study up, Other had a decent opener to catch attention, it could have been worded better as the multies seem to be a bit too broad with the slant rhyming, there's a forced multi that sticks out pretty bad, hurting his verse. he went with a basic scheme, which is still enough to take the easy win, as experience seemed to take over pretty easy. The closer was alright, overall it's not near the best i've seen him do, which is understandable under these circumstances. This was a landslide due to experience. Loosing voter could do a lot better with the right tutoring and studying up on the concept of text battling. Fair is in. Voted: DissnKuss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-16 07:00:08

Snoopy > Voted: DissnKuss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-16 13:29:46

Snoopy takes the lead Voted: DissnKuss / Snoopy316
Posted on: 2014-02-17 21:54:51