One took this with volume and quality imo. #CLASSICK Posted on: 2014-01-31 08:37:31

Murdahhhhhhh Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-30 23:11:21

nice battle here but one outshined tha other in this one, no sway fv Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-01-31 00:12:55

You know only because I have respect for and true knowledge of rap music and the hip hop community do I painfully have to give this to one the panty wearing lil girl who at least made his vers have acouple decent punches and it flowed ok. I realllllyyyyy wanted him to lose but the other was just not good at all. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-01-31 00:36:13

By the way is that a scarf on his avitar pic. What has rap come to? Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-01-31 00:38:19

@Craig Low. Its a headdress -____- Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-31 00:39:24

MMURDA! Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-31 00:55:42

GOD=your 'round your neck' MACK'LL didnt make too much sense, watch a mack will own this poodle? reads awkward, it wouldve stung harder as 'round your neck' quiker than GUILOTINE VISITS/ i liked the setup to cheese, macoroni noodles, but it took a bit too long to materialize, you need to add a multi in between that long line, otherwise the flows gets thrown off.. highlights, wasnt really much, other than maybe the toast your strudal, you kinda lost me a bit wit the last bar, towards fear and loathing.. DJ DENTON:your opening was a bit runon as well, try to minimize any unnecessary words, i would ve said , you 'can concentrate' all you want ,but them flows are MORE THAN DOOMED, to WARRANT USE, so him 'beatin me to a pulp's' just means he's a 'dickhead' wit ORANGE JUICE/ highlights would be the pulp bar, and the 'spit something well rounded', low points would be blessin in the sky, which felt a bit too obvious .. other than that, fairly decent all around flow, i'd work on better relavency in setups... in conclusion, my winner here , was a bit more polished in punch usage, and scheme work... fairs in.. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-01-31 02:20:20

ok i dont think a headdress is better or worse than a scarf. bOTH equally fruity and not cool at all. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-01-31 02:50:17

hes a soldier,dickhead Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-01-31 03:51:48

Decent spar. Both flowed thru nice. I feel one dude got in more punches with some nice simple set ups. Although both had a couple broken multies. I believe this isn't the best from either. I based my winner on who had a little more umphhhh (harder verse) . Fairs in fellas. G'Luck. About even 7's. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-01-31 05:04:37

I actually enjoyed my winners lines a lot more. Surprising here for me. Fairs In. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-01-31 07:40:31

One had a couple of hits but was way too stretched and that made the flow choppy. The other I felt had better set ups and therefor his punches came off cleaner. Was a bit predictable though. Fairs in Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-01-31 19:04:37

One was much more fluent & complex and had harder hitting bars in my opinion. The other had much more basic wordplay/punches to match with an off/forced flow at times but an overall good verse. Nice spar guys. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-01 07:20:56

What he hell happened to my losers verse at the end? What started off so well just disappeared especially the last 3 lines. Confusing as f and the flow just went. Winner had some nice punches. Cheese puff line being my favourite. Good batlle tho Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-01 08:51:42

Winner was clear here to be for real despite the made up word. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-01 10:40:57

Oh seriously? Lol. Oh well. My one vote doesn't make much of a difference. I'm tired. I been up all night. Lol. Please, excuse me for this one. Lol. *smacks self in the face* Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-01 10:46:25

Lol Dj Denton Voteback on mones bro u got this Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-01 17:58:21

One focused so much on rhyming, that he couldn't create a punchline that I could easily understand. I advised you to focus more on your punchlines first, and then let the rhymes come in unless you want to be a person who battles with multi's. Don't force things though. The other guy was more on point, though he should do way better on his set ups. Some of your punches were not hard hitting because you didn't have a nice set up. You forced your set ups. I loved the last bar though, for that was amazing! Winner took it by making more sense and being a level ahead of his opponent. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-01 19:01:47

Comment @Full Eternal Space. Please, do not regret your vote because you seen who everyone else voted for. That show's that you only votes for whoever every one else vote for. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-01 19:08:00

one needs to step it up, hes coming up short on the multies and sting. I expect more from some one claiming to be like Eminem. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-02 00:19:09

stop rolling with half baked schemes is all im saying. nice read from the winner though good stuff. Voted: HeliO / Denton
Posted on: 2014-02-02 00:21:17

good battle guys...... DJ, I expect nothing less than this in our battle. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-02 19:09:35

shaddup bitch.. MURDER, 1. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-02-27 15:52:05