this guy had more shit workin for him imo. puns read smooth and ideas connected better, alil stale in delivery but, it is what it is. loser was ok here. lil choppy in areas and flow got maaaaaaad stretched in places too. Overall one jus spoke to me alil more. Ease Killas, THV. Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-12-25 10:52:09

better concepts took this imo,, both need alot of work in the relavency of setups.. ex.. SUBREAL-your first bar was sorta relavent, wit 'knocked up' leadin to early abortion, but the second bar, had you talkin bout logicians, to physicians, then to a PORN AUDITION? you gotta start wit the concept then finish wit the same idea... PERPATRATOR- first bar, you talkin bout beating your chest, then you drop a nameflip, bout subway.... shoulda referenced sandwiches or foot longs in the setup before droppin the subway punch.. give a reason why you eatin him fresh.... anyway, one excelled here wit better punches, and concepts here, fairs in.. Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-12-27 00:55:20

tough call, wasnt really feelin either. Sub, write with a beat in your headphones, those multies are too long and clunky. theres not a beat made that you could fit all that in and still sound on it Voted: Subreal /
Posted on: 2013-12-27 15:07:15