small/contacts(as in lenses)-get the point.Murder/details , off the list, as in assumptions.Weak, as in weak students 'throats slit by germans'. a german couple made fake ads to lure men and kill them. wax/candle? geddit? Good luck broski Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-21 10:44:02

I'll try to have it in by midnight, my timezone. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-22 20:59:05

Expo - Cows (beef) are sacred in Indian religion (hindu) .... he made a reference to flames = "as for the heat" .. Glaze Tops and Cake Boss lines are punchlines on his crew, "The Baker Street Irregulars" ... "Blow up the whole street" = Another crew punchline.... The rest is self-explanatory. Drop explained and honest votes! Thanks... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-22 22:28:30

ITZ DA HOOD!! my FAM-ILY!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-23 01:18:30

Datz My Brotha Right There!! Puttin In Work!! my FAM-iLLy!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-23 14:54:52

EX : His Verses Like ..... PIPING A HOT BITCH!! ---- Need for contacts was not properly worded. Poorly framed tbh. The punch was hard, Nameplay was good but one wrong multi set made a dope bar look like above average.The dopeman plumbing punch was hard lol. -------- So This LESBO'S GOT DETAILS OUT YET? ...After followin ADS ON CRAIGLIST!! ----- Retail outlet punch was okay. Didn't make much impact tho. Verses crammed/High school thing was nice. Closer setup was weak, but a hard punch made the overall bar decent. Overall you had a good verse. Some nice punches out there, don't work too hard on multies, just write whatever comes naturally. Try to increase the relevancy of bars more. Some bars were relevant but some just didn't hit due to weakly framed,irrelevant setups. Example - ur closer. ------ Jflo3---------- haha.. how's this........WORKING- WITH-CAKE-BOSS! ------- Ok you talked about the beef thing, hes indian it was just fine. Can't be taken as flip since it didn't work with the original punch. The baker/cake boss was hard punch. The rhyme scheme wasn't totally on point. The last two syllables of first two sets didn't rhyme. -------------- matter fact, I got two straps, I POP,-THE-PAIR-IS-ON- EX-AND ......."SCIENTIST-WI TH-A-DEAD-LINE!!" ------ pair is on ex and, marathon reference punch was average in my opinion. Rhymes were fine in this. Pussy-- cat---lion thing is hella played bro, you'd have used something much better. A better concept is a base of a killer punch. tho if your framing is top notch, you can even make a bar with simple concept look dope. The closer was nice, I liked the way you flipped his bar and used it in a witty way . Overall your verse had couple of hard punches, conceptually it was a mixture of good,played and average concepts. Rhymes were fine, metaphors were fine. One of the two attempted flip was good. Overall this was a good battle, both had some hard punches in their verses. But I feel my winner had better concepts, and nameplays in his verse and that gave him an edge in my opinion. It was a neck to neck contest in framing, rhymes, and metas. High 7's to both of you. Good battle.fairs in Voted: Execute / J-Flo3
Posted on: 2013-12-24 06:21:53

gotta drop a quick 1 here, i felt this was quite below both of your abilities, both of u had lines and concepts that just didnt really make sense. im gonna vote this way based on punch strength. Voted: Execute / J-Flo3
Posted on: 2013-12-24 06:34:14

I agree. Mine was a bit forced and rough, due to having to meet the crew battle deadline. I appreciate the FV's though guys! Much respect. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-25 00:42:19

Gd Opener & Shit Closer x2 Voted: Execute / J-Flo3
Posted on: 2013-12-25 21:48:30

CONGRATS BRUH!!! ITS THE FAM-ILLY!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-25 23:29:51