damn dope bars .. #Respect Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-16 21:18:13

one was a bit harder here, more complex multis and harder punches Voted: Proctologist / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2013-12-17 01:11:41

lolz @ lock... 90% of that shit on LB been used in a live battle at some point. niggas was on lb tha DAY OF tha bombin w/ it....lolz, BOOM tho MURDER, 1. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-12-17 02:12:08

Aight. Proctologist ----- Watch this DUDE get NERVOUS Bitch take the Needles strait THRU your SURFACE I'm rippin thru Barcodes to show I OWNED this bitch like a PROOF of PURCHASE -------- You had good set of rhymes, appreciate the fact that you capped only the words that rhyme. Concept was decent, punch was okay i must say. You woulda executed the concept in much better way tbh. --- I'm a Badass that's Uncanny I'll grab the Sniper rifle like Christian bale in Out of the FURNACE and send bullets thru your EPIDERMIS now that's what I call feeling SQUIRMISH if u want war son I'll battle u on the spot and I'll battle u in PERSON I'll even let u borrow 1 of my VERSES no matter which way your going to get HURTKID I murder Mcs "for free without a fee"like doing Community SERVICE u been here 7 years ask yourself what's your PURPOSE ------ Now honestly, I liked the flow and rhymes were basic but sweet, there ain't no rhyme in ur verse that can be called as "broken". So pretty clean verse overall. I feel the punch element woulda made your verse much stronger. Only couple of punches were in your verse and they were okay. Still, your verse lacking the metaphor factor tbh you should look after it. Though props, I can see much improvement in u. -------------EloH StackZ ---------- Listen rookie, here's a cookie... Now get the fuck OFF OUT MY SITE/ I'll never get beat by a nigga with this much "sugar in his tank", it'd be the worst LOSS OF MY LIFE/ I'm basically wasting 8 bars on this faggot, luckily it's only COSTING A SNIPE/Judges saying that's "the bomb" every time I "finish lines" like BOSTON, IGHT?/ -------- Ok good set of rhymes here, you structured it pretty well. But I didn't really feel the punch. Conceptually bar was average.I would like to correct lockhart here, THE BOSTON LINE IS PLAYED AS FUCK and you used in different way, so theres nothing biting as such or nothing to be alert of. lol -------- Who "gassed u up"? This guys RUNNING ON FUMES/ I mean Proctologist? Ur names associated with fingers up the ass & CUMMING ON DUDES/ U shouldn't set out looking for beef, sending opens, GUNNING FOR VIEWS/ If ur only weapons a Pea shooter, "ur parents" are bound to find their "SUN IN THE NEWS ---------- Ok there you go again, good set of rhymes but punch element was missing somewhere tbh only punch I liked was the closing punch and I think its the bar of the battle. Overall your verse had some hits, and some misses and it was not the usual eloh we see showing up. My winner had a better verse overall but my loser would have outplayed him if he had used some good punches in it. Fair's in. Give it back someday lol. High to Mid. Voted: Proctologist / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2013-12-17 12:30:55

P.S. rating has been given a lil strict . Loser should add 0.5 to it while winner should add 0.7 to it. Its done just coz you guys do better next time. Dont hate me now lol Voted: Proctologist / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2013-12-17 12:33:15

not gona lie. I like te way the winner finished it. I knew it was coming but I like how he used it at the end. it had more sting. loser needs to spike their punch I wasent feeling it. you took this lightly and became lightweight. Voted: Proctologist / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2013-12-17 22:05:04

expo for white people. loser had played wordplay, it was exhausted. im tired of hearing the same thing. I like when people do something simple and original. Voted: Proctologist / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2013-12-17 22:10:36

This Was Close. My Loser Had It in The Bag But Lost It At the End. Fairs! Voted: Proctologist / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2013-12-18 15:26:39

FV Voted: Proctologist / ELOH STACKz
Posted on: 2013-12-20 07:03:37