GB that was a quick write amigo. was bored Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 03:36:59

We're all here for fun, who cares. =) Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 03:39:31

fairs in Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 04:03:15

Tony can u explain you fuckin vote ? :o Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 04:09:11

he's callin it a draw Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 05:25:54

k. i wan't expos. we can't elevate with gb and fairs in and fv ... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 05:27:35

this battle is pretty weak tbh for various reasons/rtv first had flow thought you was going some where with it but all chopped up rhymes all over the place no hard hitting punch's hard to grasp what you were trying to say/porfiro i like your humor how you flip back brother but text carry's different concepts of multi's set-ups before punch's/i see potential stick around you'll be an problem soon.fairs in Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 05:36:23

was quick writing dis .. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 05:39:17

Winner won because of the better structure, but you both need to elevate. There was too much self hype in yours Reap, my loser lost because of the straight simplicity. Theres no clever references on either box, nor wordplay or evn one decent punch. I know yous can do better. No hate, fair vote, peace! Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 05:39:30

Thanks fam shroom. i understand Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 05:41:04

I just want you guys to hear me on a mic with a beat... Check out an example after I got out of the hospital...I was doing this off my head and overdubbed a video. (It's from 2008 I think) I was younger then. http://youtu.be/X88F 8ylp81E (Sorry for sayin "nigga" but it was in the song...NOTHING was sped up. I can prove it...Here is a newer "joke" cover I did - SUPER MAN Eminem - http://www.youtube.c om/watch?v=1FmAJJKHB Fo (I even freestyled some portuguese in there "nunca deixa uma puta" bring me down. haha - Thanks for the imput!! CHECK OUT THE VIDS AND COMMENT. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 06:02:49

nice song por .. good vocals. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 06:04:54

SORRY - WRONG LINKS http://www. youtube.com/watch?v= X88F8ylp81E and SUPERMAN by EMINEM http://www .youtube.com/watch?v =1FmAJJKHBFo Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 06:05:42

Thanks Reap - I did the mixes and everything - If you ever want to record something. Just record with a phone (shit quality) to the beat. Email it to me...I will upload the beat (or you can send the raw beat) and I can make a master copy for you. I do it all the time from peoples CELL PHONES to my home studio (PC only stuff) Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 06:07:15

i don't rap vocals actually well . i can only flow in my mind. i STUTTER damn alot por Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 06:09:28

R-r-r-Reap, S-s-so what if you stutta? You're leavin stranga's in the gutta never cut ya but try to duck ya then they get the bread 'n butta Don't worry about an impediment T-t-try to say " fuck a lisp." If that Asian was an Asian chick in your pic then you'd already be on this _______ - Huahahaha caralho meu, to fodido...(wrong language) Is that better for this site? That type of shit? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 06:16:11

boomting... Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 06:33:59

Reap - The structure needs work and I'm not feeling the 3 syllable rhyme scheme for multis. You had some inner rhymes, but it wasn't enough to grab me. The punchlines were pretty soft too... Porfirio - Not a good response at all. One syllable rhyme schemes and weak punches won't earn you votes over here... overall, a pretty weak battle. Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 06:47:33

Not a great battle. My winner had better structure but mostly filler. I can see where she's trying to set up her punches but it's still falling short. Also, needs to work on matching her rhymes up (i know it's hard with English not being your native language but still). My loser had no structure but attacked more. The punches just came weak for the lack of setups, multis and wordplay. Try to start with proper setups to your punches and the rest will start to fall into place....No hate. Vote back. Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 08:07:22

neither hav got proper multis, winner only won cos she actually filled her bars, she attempted punchlines but they didnt really make sence, please dont use that "i wrote this quick excuse" cos you had the opener, you had as much time as you wanted Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 08:30:07

close battle but my winner edged it out Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 10:20:22

we all write quick. do we not? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-03 13:23:48

good shit finally. somebody end dis wanna-be champ. Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-03 18:05:40

haha that comeback was epic Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-04 08:45:08

both need to check out battles from more experienced members, or check the hotlist for idea on how to actually construct a bar/verse. i just felt 1 offered more in the punch category but both were quite poor there. Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-04 10:33:43

My problem is, I like to go on a mic...I sing - But I love to freestyle. I do freestyles here in Brazil and rap in Portuguese and English in the same verse and people go crazy. I also DJ, AND I am a Police Officer - which makes it off the wall, lol...It is Tabo I guess. Also I am a Krav Maga teach (Personal Defesne and Arms Training) so people don't get me...I don't understand how this site works for TEXT yet, but I am starting to get it...I just don't like this "cut your throat and kill you" shit...It makes me think of everyday fanboys. THANKS FOR THE IMPUT!!! ReapTheVow will win again, but she knows what she is doing - But don't ever use that excuse "it was quick" again...When I write there is no backspace bar. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-11-05 18:09:19

one needs to fill the box but all in all one was a little stretched and other stayed a little more on topic and on track. fv vb gb. Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-05 22:17:02

eh Voted: PrincessClaire / Porfirio
Posted on: 2013-11-05 23:35:03