felt hiatus took this fair vote send a battle Voted: poseidon11 /
Posted on: 2013-10-29 17:23:41

Goodluck both. GB guys Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-29 19:24:45

dis battle. fair. Voted: poseidon11 /
Posted on: 2013-10-29 21:20:38

Both of you need to clean up the wording and fix your multis. Okay my winner simply had a better grasp of what a battle verse should look like and he had 1 jab that connected. The other had some nice ideas but he fucked up the execution which turned them into awkward worded jabs that didn't land. I suggest reading some battles from guys like Jason, UA, Daddio and TalkSick so you can get a better understanding of battling. Too many forced/broken multis here fellas clean it up. Fairs in Voted: poseidon11 /
Posted on: 2013-10-30 19:03:16

both had ruff bars n need ta clean up but fair enuf i felt one squeezed in more hard punches n one came light fairs in... Voted: poseidon11 /
Posted on: 2013-10-31 04:22:16

Both need seroius work. Multi's need to be cleaned and not be so forced. punches were practically nonexistent and i dont evenknow where the concepts were. I'm going with the one who sounded less whack. Voted: poseidon11 /
Posted on: 2013-10-31 11:19:09

Both of you need to start being more complex and thinking about setting up your punches. There is no relevance from one line to the next and all of your punches were pretty weak. Think of it like this... Texting is like telling a story about your opponent and putting him down at the same time. you wouldnt just go from one line to the next to do that would you? you would have set ups and punches that all go together. You have a lot of potential though. Voted: poseidon11 /
Posted on: 2013-10-31 13:01:16