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Posted on: 2013-10-07 17:16:04

One mc edged hs opponent with some better wordplay in his punches. Both were consistent, gb Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-07 17:23:26

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Posted on: 2013-10-07 17:32:33

not bad Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-07 22:29:45

nice spar here. I felt one executed his concepts better than his opponent. in both verses however, the ending was the strongest. both had lines they could do with out tho.. fair's in. gb Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-07 22:57:30

Ray ---- good drop. First bar was ight. I was diggin the concept, at first i thought it not a good approach but readin it over you executed it nicely. It had a nice sting. I thought the followin bars were eh, good concepts but punch wasn't hittin hard for me. The final bars were nice, i liked the creativity and punches hit well. Fresh read bud. Phen ---- Your first bar is a perfect example of simplistic wordplay that made significant impact to the final punch. The build up was nice, and the concept was fresh. Great bar. 'Shots at Raven Legend' was textbook, and final concept was creative (R.I.P Tom Clancy). I didn't think you executed as well as it could've been, i felt that it could've been a harder punch if it was built up better? I'm tryin to come up w/ an alternative. I also believe that there was a line-and-a-half in your verse that could've been taken out and substituted for another bar perhaps.. Nonetheless good verse. Good battle overall. I felt one was more creative throughout and dropped them harder punches in the end. Stay up Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-08 03:40:35

Ray: good verse here. im starting to see relevance in set ups in flashes here... you have a nice flow and the punches just need to hit a little harder to get a better rating IMO. IamFlow: i was really feeling this drop man. that opener was doooope. also i liked the Ray lewis line too. the flow and set ups were there along with heavy punches. Fair is in. Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-09 22:49:44

Yo this was a dope battle here tbh. Ray: First bar was set up pretty nicely w/ relevance however the phe/fee line and concept is pretty played at this point against your opponent still nice way to introduce the flow. Next bar I wasn't really feeling the car suspensions part and feel like the next two bars made the flow sound a bit off w/ multi selection. I did like the asking for a mircale line and the nom was a beast too but once again I felt there needed some rewording there. Have heard the IP thing too here so the closer didn't as heavy. Overall a nice verse but I think you need to work on execution and making sure all your multis match up perfectly. Phe: Nice opener and the flow was on point for a long multi off the jump. Next bar I liked the nameplay here and the flow was nice. Final bar everything was relevant and although the wp was simplistic it still was executed nicely. I did however feel like you could of fit in another punch in your verse and that you took up a lot of room w/ the ravens line. Overall though a smooth verse w/ some heavy hits. Fairs in high to low Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-10 01:30:19

this battle made my dick limp... Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-10 09:07:07

This was a solid battle but one edged in my opinion. One emcee had some good concepts a couple where played but it was fresh due o the set-up. Had some decent wordplay. Liked certain punches. Closer was mehh but it still was cool a real solid verse. The other emcee also had some okay nameflips. Concepts were decent I felt the set-up it what separated these two emcees. It was more of a strecth for one emcee but this was a solid verse as well. Closer as nice. Low to Mid (Respect to both)!!!! Fairs In!!! Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-10 12:56:43

Look At That. The First Time Ive Seen A Disappointing Verse From Ill Phenom. Voted: Ray Zeus / Ill Phenom
Posted on: 2013-10-10 16:07:32