More technical.. better flowing scheme, more intricate syllable structure, more impressive concept, etc... Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-08 11:06:48

health care free, presidents live, obama care. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-08 13:48:04

chair with locks, goldie locks, chair meaning white house seat Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-08 13:49:29

Pretty one sided here. Flow, WP, multis, all executed better by the winner. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-08 15:21:28

Loser could have set-up his punch better, not too bad. If the execution was better it would've hit a lot harder, valiant effort though. Keep elevating. Winner: Nice multis/syllable count, solid set-up for the punch and nice execution on the concept. Definitely a near-perfect bar there, GL to both.. Fair's in fellas. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-09 02:00:39

Wow, a lot of different opinions throughout this. Can't wait to see the out-come, once again.. Good luck to both. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-09 02:03:30

@Obey, niggas like Row's opinions dont matter... lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-09 04:21:13

I felt one used an obscure reference and his concepts didn't fully connect. The other packed too many concepts together that it clouded the message and made his wording awkward. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-09 06:05:41

It sat well with me.. fv Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-09 08:55:19

Not much to say that already hasn't been said but my choice was a level up on his opponent.. I felt my choice had some strong execution and more.. His opponent was decent but needs to step it up against strong competition and tighten his shit up.. The fair is in.. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-09 11:09:18

I Believe It's Obama CareS. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-09 15:01:18

Tbh very disappointed in this battle. Although, I know my battle with enf and I should have been better. I know it's a pain in the ass with one bar sometimes cause we try to fit so much... Indonesia: the concept was mehh, Too many moses concepts, and twitter/follow stuff.. You just took it and blended it together... It's there, it's a punch, and it all connects, it really just wasn't that strong.. Moses: brought a nice concept, nice wordplay, a little double meaning in the build up... However, the verse wasn't direct at his opponent, which I find a huge plus in a one bar battle. I thought it the wording was awkward as hell even after multiple reads. .. I'm not going to lie, this is a tough ass decision.. Both made it close because of there own issues, and if I either would have took the time to make there bar a bit cleaner, it wouldn't have been close... It's really close. I'm going to lean this way for wording and a direct punch though... The other had everything going for him but failed to make a direct connection and failed heavily on writing his bar smooth for us to read. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-09 17:39:49

Winner no doubt will step it up next round. both I thought had too much goin on for a power punch to be effective. that being said one was still better. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-09 18:31:55

quite a tough call here, i can see reasons to give the W to either here but im leaning this way because i felt this guy came more direct with the punch, the losers concept was more interesting but i just feel it wasnt exectuted as well it could have been to produce a stronger hit. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-10 05:27:37

this is an interesting battle.. felt one used a concept that given his opponent, was a bit too obvious, i wouldve liked to have seen a more clever or different angle if your gonna attempt to use an 'over used 'concept.. that way it'll seem fresh all over again.. setup lacked good relavency, you had reference words in quotations but as it got towards the end, it kinda fizzled.. the plus was that it was readable.. and didnt feel choppy.. other mananged to throw in quite a bit , problem is it felt kinda choppy.. due to the place ment in multis.. setup was relavent, towards the final product, which is always a good thing.. my advice is to try and read it out loud, and make sure it sounds natural(if you feel like you need to add a word or two for it to read well, then you know the sentence is off..) anyway, winner here did more with what he had, wit an original idea that worked... fairs in.. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-10 05:27:37

Man barz in here Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-10 14:18:33

fv, both could have done alot better but fair is in Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-10 23:25:28

3-3low vote deleted. Voted: Indonesia / Erupt
Posted on: 2013-10-11 00:27:00