PUPPET MASTERS. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-05 10:36:57

let me know if u don't understand anythin particularly the chest bar Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-05 10:38:57

PUPPET MASTERS Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-05 18:56:25

e-piff: you fell off towards the end homie. you had a good verse starting off then you got weaker throughout. the mystery line was your best line by far to me, you just need to work on set ups and relevancy towards your punches. and try to rhyme more than one word...like you did on your closer. you had some forced multis here too, dont be afraid to change rhyming schemes if you are starting to force words... Steph: you had an overall good verse and the dishes line/opener was dope. the rest was ehhhhh i was expecting alittle more TBH. you had some fresh concepts though and the flow was there. good overall verse. fairs in Voted: DOZAA / Step S
Posted on: 2013-10-05 21:29:23

Dance!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-06 00:12:01

fv is in props stephen Voted: DOZAA / Step S
Posted on: 2013-10-06 06:27:50

E-piff: you started off good but towards the end it slick fell apart... The concepts were very basic....the multies were too... Stephen: I liked this drop... Some nice punches in there with some ehhh jabs... That opening line was crack but the closer was ok... Coulda been fire with a little different wording...I didnt get the chest to your face line so give me an expo of that... But still nice drop... Fair tossed... Voted: DOZAA / Step S
Posted on: 2013-10-06 19:49:27

piff you got nice lil text delivery just need to work on creativity, the other was pretty solid all around... both need to make sure they are counting syllables cus some of them were off.... fairs in tho one was a shade better in all areas Voted: DOZAA / Step S
Posted on: 2013-10-06 21:44:34

Ik the battles over but could you explain the chest bar? :3 Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-10-10 00:42:37